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Awesome way to conclude Winter Wrap Up. Really liked the fact that Amethyst, after receiving inspiration from Fusk and Redheart took control of the situation and managed to save Winter Wrap Up. Hope to see Swarm of the Century soon.
6453707 Thanks! I like to try to make things a little unexpected!
Eaters...well, I look forward to the twists you're going to pull on Swarm of the Century next.
I was half expecting Barb, either themself or by direction, burning that poor abomination of a logjam to ge everything going again.
Hope Dusk can get that damage seen to and fixed, and now whats Lyra up to? Its not bonbon who is the secret agent here?
6453722 Thanks! I can't wait for them to made their presence known!
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You are both right and wrong. The riddle was a compulsion, but in the end, It did change a little. It was painful to admit but it really worked way better with the change. I freaking love the final result
As for characters, that is my biggest goal. I want them to be people. Dusk and Shining and Cadence grew up together. They love each other. Making anything less of their relationship is an insult to the characters. I can only hope to keep building my world to such a degree.
She ate the super drug, and managed to hold things together long enough to heal Dusk and defeat the Ursa. After that, having access to so much drove her to flee in hopes of escaping the noise.
Anyway, you're really building up what I can only assume to be the Crystal Empire. In fact, you're building up a lot of lore here. Can't wait to see how this goes.
6453869 Haha. Barb likes fire. She would probably have burnt it all down if she had the chance.
Bonbon is innocent! Poor girl keeps getting accused! :pinkielaugh:
In the end, Ponyville had a good Winter Wrap-Up. Perhaps their best in decades.
And Lyra? She's doing her job.
Loving the story. I am thinking doing something similar, as in with anthro/humanized still working on the lore to that it makes (sorta/kinda) sense. Anyways loving the story.
6453943 Well thank you very much! I do love world building and having a lore built in my own mind really helped to make growing my story a joy. It's a fantastic challenge, but a great joy. Good luck with your project, and thanks for reading!
And just like that the day was saved thanks to Amethyst. What fun this arc was.
6456543 Well thank you very much! I'm glad everone seems to enjoy the fact my changes brought a background character into focus!
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This may just be me being biased, but this fandom does enjoy background character content just as much as, give or take, the main characters.
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Very true! I just worry when I bend cannon, that I might end up breaking it for some people. Like with Trixie,I am sure more tha a few people didn't see what I was going for with her.
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HAha. In truth, I really didn't do much more than make a list and accepted the suggestions of what to add from my editors.
I should have done something like that, but don't worry, I came up with a different fun solution!
I really like how it worked out, I'm amazed how people fell in love with certain characters.
I am so scared I'll fuck this up. But I've got three years to work on it, so hopefully I will manage to make something worth the buildup.
I've been hinting, but I basically out of flashbacks planned for her. So unless something comes up, she's gone until EG.
Random Question: How many ponies know about what Dusk did on that farm with the plow? How many are going to find out? What will their reactions be?
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Oh!? Fun!
About 100 earth ponies and 30 pegasi witnessed him pushing the plow. But word of mouth spread it all over town so everypony in Ponyville has heard about it already.
With the Magistrate of Ponyville doing brute labor? The gossip magazines in Canterlot will be all over the story by tuesday.
The Canterlot Elite? Confusion and disapointment, the common pony? They are impressed, and happy to see Princess Celestia's star student is a man of the people and not some snob like say... Blueblood. The horror!
6462629 The reactions I was wondering about were the ones closest to Dusk. The ones that would not be happy about him overexerting himself, like Redheart, Bronze, Cadence, etc.
6463548 all three are covered next chapter!
6470440 skipping over the rest, Shi is a terminology used sometimes for futa or trans female characters. Done specifically on purpose just for Lyra. Before others know she is trans, they use she, but once it's revealed everyone starts using shi instead.
Yeah, the DuskxRarity with Sweetie and Barb scenes are super cute and heart warming!
Trixie's growth was so sudden and to an unprecedented scale so she stood out to the degree that she was good enough to be part of Dusk and Sunset's private classes. Celestia was delighted because she could start trying several plans to save Luna not just one. Sadly things fell apart and she was left with only one gambit to save her sister.
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He likes Dusk, but it's Mac's nature, if it isn't direct family, he stays extreemly reserved, plus he has a histroy himself and knows that not all relationships last.
HA! Yeah, AJ just feels like the type to nag when she doesn't like whats going on.
Well it only makes sense!
I've heard a lot of reactions to it. They are all quite amusing but you are quite right, what more needs to be said :3
By default, the comics are very not cannon. They are amusing, but rarely adaptible sadly, due to how many of my ideas they openly disagree with.
Fucking eh! Damn Celestia sure screwed Twilight over.
Thanks! I got the idea from a few different fantasy series I've read over the years, and just kinda giggered them all together to make it work!
Oh she probably did, a little, on the inside! Whenever I get around to rediting these chapters I'll try to flesh her reaction out!
And here is where I fall flat on my face. I totally fucked this up and when Iget back to this chapter with one of my editors I NEED to make sure I flesh these issues out better. Barb is one of my failings and in future chapters my editors have slapped me for forgetting to make sure her presence is accounted for >.>;
[qoute]First of all, I think I upvoted after the second chapter, to say nothing about commenting. As for why your story isn't more popular, It wasn't really a problme of popular, I was just really pissed becuase I had not receaved a csingle downvote in over 3 months and then suddenly got 6 or 7 in two or three days. It was heart breatking.
This is a major issue I've waffled on, and not just becuase of scaring people away. It also has to do with world building vs rushing things though. I am willing to sacrifice popularity to get my story told the way I want it. So I make chapters the length that feels is needed. I try my hardest to make breaks at 'natural' points. Aka cliff hangers, epic reveales and when the story is done. It can be a pain finding the right spot to break.
HA! He is a very lucky stallion, no matter what else.
Well the harness thing did come up before in Applebucking Season, but this was my first try at real humor and Suprise was a huge aid to that!
I like to establish things! And to foreshadow. I foreshadow the shit out of everything >.>;;
I felt like it was more buildup/world building, but I understand where you are comming form. Too much filler can drown my will to read.
It's at the start of fall, as the balance to the summer sun celebraiton.
Not at all. It's a nice story about a friend pushing a friend to take confidence in something she does fantasticly. Minor tweeks at most.
Good catch!
Or was it never a test in the first place? ;)
She HATES being useless or a burden on others. She already experenced it once this summer after the Dawn Bloom, now she is having it happen again.
It's fluttershy, shed loving him squeeze him and tell him everythings alright!
6473951 Wait... if Nightmare Night is a Fall holiday, why isn't it acknowledged in the chapter titles?
6474607 What do you mean? I haven't done a nightmare night Chapter? o.O;;
6474637 For one, I just got notified of your comment the regular way.
For another, that's my point. You said Nightmare Night is a Fall holiday, yet you seem to have skipped it. I'm guessing that means you're also not stick to the show's assertion that all this stuff happens in a single year?
6474651 Nope, and I don't think the show does either.
To more specifically to answer your question, every season of the show will take around a year, thus by season 4 Dusk will be 25ish, Rarity 29ish, Barb 20ish, ect. I wont show off every birthday, but I will try to include or reference many of them, like I did Dash's.
6474651 Oh! And good to hear. Hopefully they start working properly for you man!
Fluttershy talked back to Rarity? Wow.
I liked the direction this one went. Rather than Dusk magically solving all the problems, he worked with Amethyst to help, thereby building more of the relationship between them.
I think it speaks for itself
Wait... so are those papers from the Doctor, suggesting he really can see the future?
Well, at least this Dusk Shine didn't mess up the plowing with magicz.
Dusk Shine seems a lot more mature than Twilight throughout this story.