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The very first thing in this story, and it's not even italicized fully. All you have is Sunday in italics. I thought we taught you better than that.
7434508 Haha. Yeah, sorry. For some reason when I imported this chapter yesterday, it added hundreds of extra html tags for italics, bold and underline. I spent about 3 hours cleaning it up but I guess I missed a few. Sorry man, just... just put the stick down. Oh god, not in the face!
Okay, this chapter was well worth the wait. Watching Pinkie and Dusk cuddle and flirt with each other, especially with the tail grab, was quite funny yet sweet to watch. Brinze being jealous by Pinkie sitting on Dusk and smooching him along with getting teased by her was also hilarious. The fact that Bronze decided to cuddle with Dusk to comfort him was heartwarming. Cherry Berry being a captain of flying balloons was interesting and I liked the dynamic between Rarity and Scootaloo. Thanks for the amazing chapter.
yea update, yea update, yea update.
now after ready this yummy chapter i got to say, why do i have feel the thing are going to go wrong, or dusk going to do something dumb and get hurt again and end up in hospital, i got to wonder how good dusk insurance is and who is pay for it......i have feeling it all on the princess dime.
You meant "this episode"?
Because I've just done reading the chapter.
7434557 Thanks! Pinkie is good at bring out the expressive side of people, most of all someone she is sweet on. Bronze is more protective than jealous but Pinkie assaulting Dusk was too much fun not to run with . Bronze is so embarrassed about falling asleep haha. Cherry Berry needed more air time, after Pinkie used her balloon for the Running of the Leaves. I love making uncommon parings work together, like Rarity and Scootaloo. Thanks for the feedback!
7434593 I feel bad for taking so long with this part, but for some reason, my brain just didn't run. Such a shame. But I'm rolling again, so hopefully I can keep this up.
HAHA
Don't worry. I have "plans" for this. Plans for a lot of stuff. I've been feeding little hints, but we shall see how it rolls.
7434900 I'm a little odd, the way I reference things can be strange sometimes. Basically: Chapter is how I reference events directly based off a episode of the show. Sometimes including mergers of several episodes. And to reduce delay between updates, I put out the chapters in parts to try to keep the story rolling... ignoring my obvious slow weeks / months Glad you're enjoying, can I hope I can keep entertaining!
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You're awful.
7435910 I try my best, but without my editors for backup, I end up free-falling more often then not.
7483415 I'm trying for a bit of a twist by introducing a humanized species but keeping aspects of the equine society including sociology and psychology. Hopefully it hits you in a good way, but if it doesn't work for you, I understand! Thanks for giving it a shot regardless and I hope I hear back from you again someday!