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Well that was an awesome chapter as always; so much stuff! I liked all the little details, like how you described the impact boots function through Applejack before bringing out their intended purpose. And also the seals... Does Applejack's mention of the Ponyville seal and its use mean the Apples are landed gentry? Ha! Take that Canterlot. We've got our own homegrown nobility.
Also the way you handled pinkie pie throughout this chapter has been phenomenal.
yea for updates
Nice chapters. It was surprising to see Dusk kicking the hydra's ass. Gummy appearance and Pinkie showing her love for Dusk by tending him was sweet. Likewise, it was badass to see how Bronze and the weather team were quick to come to the rescue. RD's reaction to missing all e events on the chapter was hilarious.
Someone rolled real bad on the encounter table, but then made up with some critical successes where needed after. All the details they cant put in the show but make sense in more detailed recreations of a given episode or time and location.
Impact boots are an idea looked at before and Spitfire just happened to deonstrate them, or was thing a very fast write up from a preview or other viewing of the episode? Then again, Spitfire did an Iron Man landing?
I still think top trained Earth Ponies dont have to worry about parachutes, or landing, as they only hit the ground at about 150 mph and can come charging straight out of the crater.
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7212417 Good catch!
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HAHA! That's not a bad way of putting things!
Thanks! This is always my goal!
Nah, they've been an idea I've been waiting to introduce for ages. I'm a few episodes behind on the show to tell the truth.
Yeah, but how do you keep them from throwing up all over the place on the way down to ground level?
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Kicking its ass is a very generous way of putting it, and a lot of people are going to say the same. Dusk did impressive, but he was never going to win that fight, haha.
GUMMY!!!
Very sweet, yeah!
Yeah, I've been waiting to show off Bronze's leadership, and she's been needing a good day for ages, so here we finally had a reason for one. Yeah, I wrote Dash's reaction before the rest of the chapter, it was just too funny.
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Hell yeah!
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It was a lot to cover, but I think I fit it all in!
I am amazed. I haven't even told the editors this but you guessed it. Good catch!
After a great disaster, Granny Smith's father begged Princess Celestia for land for the people of his devastated farm town. She granted him ownership to the land that would become Ponyville, and made him the first leader. For ages, he gave away land to others who had lost their homes, until Ponyville as a city was eventually founded, with him as the first mayor. You could say the Apple's own/owned all of Ponyville and gifted it away.
You don't know how much of a relief this is. I struggled for ages with Pinkie. She is impossible to write >.>;;
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Repeated regular balistic freefall training on the vomit trebuchet. TM CMC.
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That's not a very efficient way of spreading federalizer.
It's in my hair! IT'S IN MY HAIR!!!
Lot of great and exciting moments, but also leaving enough open for the next part where the Pinkie sense, and Pinkie, can be explored further. There is, however, one issue I'm unclear on. Is Thunder dead, because they didn't really talk about it later? I hope not because I was really enjoying the teasing going on with the twins.
7216549 No, he'z okay. It comes up when Shining Armor is receiving a report from his healer. Sorry, I'll try to be more reassuring in the future.
7216431 Hey! Glad your enjoying it so far. Yeah, I might have been overly cautious about making sure I was being clear. And don't worry, while Surprise isn't part of the main cast, she will return!
7274252 Haha. An error leftover from the original writing without editor days. thanks for pointing it out!
I can just imagine Dash's reaction to being told how big the hydra was.
"What do you mean it was a nine-headed, ninety-footer?!"