Page generated in 0.044 seconds
Total duration
608 users online
1,284,002 hits today, 2,879,217 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Would have liked to see the second round but tease shit and never show it from time to time too, dood.
5370104 just cross your legs and hold out for the sleepover.
Love the chapter. It was romantic and sexy between Dusk and AJ.
5370322 thanks!!
Marvelous work. So Dusk has polished Rarity's gems and tasted Applejack's apples. Who's next? Will he pop Pinkie's balloon? Will he taste the Rainbow? Or will he chase Fluttershy's Butterflies? Carry on the good work!
This has been a very enjoyable story. I've enjoyed much of the outside world being built to add conflict to the story. I've also enjoyed many of the little aspects that were put in to keep a reader thinking about how everything will turn out later. Can't wait for even more chapters later on.
5371402 Nonono nothing that complicated.
AJ was in the labor board filling out two requests, one for emergency help cleaning up the deadwood, and then a second one for the harvest help. She finished with the emergency request first since it was, well an emergency and gave it to Ginger. Then while she was filling out the harvest request Ginger came back with the bad news about her emergency request. Tbus AJ's sudden angry reaction. Meadow Song an't a bad kid haha.
5370378 Haha. Why not Twist Trixie's Teat's? Or Grind Gilda's Groin?
Don’t worry. The other mare’s will each get personal development. But dont expected to see Dusk butfuck Dash and Gilda in the next chapter. I'm trying to keep the relationships organic and realistic to the universe I'm building.
5370612 Thanks! It's always a pleasure to see people pick up on the little things that I tirelessly take the time to sneak in to tease the read with haha. The next part might not be out for a while but I'll try to at the very least make it you're Xmas gift
Huh. It really IS AppleBucking season.
*BOOO!*
Come on, you can't tell me you weren't thinking that!
Anyway, it was a nice chapter, and it establishes Dusk and AJ's current relationship. Can't wait for more chapters!
5371889 Don't worry, I made that same dumb joke a hundred times to myself this last month while working on this chapter.
Dusk's relationship with AJ and Rarity is now established, but what will come next? Princess Luna has put Dusk in charge as representative to Dash's griffin friend. Is becoming a diplomat his future?
Tune in next time for more of Dusk's wacky adventures!
5372135 Well, if your Gilda and Rainbow Dash interactions are anywhere near as good as the one in Turnabout Storm (the rewrite by RavenRegios), you're golden.
5372540 I'll give it a read and see if it fits in my universe. Never heard of it but... who knows!
I just realized something. AJ admitted to both have fooled around with mares and use Rarity's toys. Does that mean that before Dusk came in, she and Rarity were occasional lovers? Also, in a previous interlude RD mentioned that she likes AJ's smell when she's in heat? Does that mean that bisexuality is a common occurrence between the mares in Equestria due to ashore age if stallions or is it like Xenophilia where even the stallions exhibit bisexuality? If this comment offends anyone, then I apologize.
5372985 i encourage you to read into it as deeply as you want! But without revealing too much of soon to arrive chapters? Bisexuality is a fact of life for mares in heat in my universe. It's about the only way to find relief from the heat cycle without appearing like a whore grinding up against strange stallions.
On the AJ/Dasb/Rarity question? It's implied they have occasionally gone to kne another for support. More then that is spoilers!
5371779 I understand. Carry on the excellent work.
5373297 thanks! Glad you are enjoying it and can't wait to see what you do think of how I handle things in the future chapters
i am in no place to criticize this topic or how you write out sex scenes but considering the rarity scene which by your idea is not officially part of the story plot and the one with applejack which is part of the story plot i just gotta ask: is dusk ever gonna bang the mares anytime in this season.
like i said i am in no place but if not including the bonus chapter sex scene, all dusk got is tease, oral and foreplay but never gets to the main course. i mean i would like to see a chapter that is part of the story plot that has a full sex scene or at least dusk in a threesome or orgy.
if the purpose of the bonus chapter was to show that dusk does get some real action, then never mind
ps: will trixie be introduced to the story and be part of dusk's herd?
5441073 Haha, its all good man. I understand what you mean and I will stop doing the shortened sex scenes in the future since other people mentioned the same point. Going on with that same topic, the next planed major sex scene isn't until the post Boast Buster's Interlude, however more fun stuff is to come.
As for your last question? Don't worry, Boast Buster's, the next chapter after Griffon Brush off is one I've been thinking about since day one.
5457802 haha. Intresting questions and a fun concept but not one that is part of my tale. Without spoilers and referencing things only revealed in story, in Interlude 3 Dusk has a flashback to the last time he ever saw Sunset Shimmer five years ago. She makes a comment in that flashback suggesting she was planing on rewarding him for finally standing out from the crowd by having sex later that night,,but Dusk can not stand her lies and cheating on something he finds as simple and pure as a game between CU and Starswirl U.
Also, no Dusk is not a virgin, nor are AJ or Rarity. The implication is that the sex scenes in past chapters continued past tbe end of the narrative but to keep the chapters from running off a cliff. I have a scene in the next chapter to show more of how their three sided relationship works, and it includes some talk about sex and sharing.
For some reason...I don't think Dusk is gonna end up with all the mares of mane 6. But, he would be with a few of the mane 6 and a few outside.