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I guessed this so long ago I've had time to ferget about it already. Great chapter in any case, looking forward to the next one.
Not a bad chapter, I hope you will make more.
This chapter was very dramatic and emotive. Poor Rarity. Still, thanks for the great chapter. Hope the next one comes soon.
i'm still trying to puzzle out whether dash and dusk are going to get together. because right now, it's being made to look like thunder-dud and dash are going to get togther.
5949127 don't worry! Major devloments are coming for Dash!
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5948850 thanks to all three of you! Don’t worry, more to come soon. Probably gonna stick to my approximately weekly update schedule.
The next chapter is my first dual chapter, combining both Fall Weather Friends and Bridle Gossip. With so much going on for Dusk as Ponyville’s new Magistrate, making time for the small things for his friends and lovers is difficult. But with a black lotus smuggler inside his territory, Dusk's new addiction is about to run headfirst into his duty to his people...
5949231 You forgot the "p" in development.
5949561 haha. Sorry. Working on my cell phone.
5949580 We make mistakes and I am writing a new Dusk Shine series myself.
5949276 Hey mate love the story keep up the good work.
5951968 Well thanks, that's a real honor! I'll try to keep things fun for people, while trying to get my rocks off with world building! Hope you continue to enjoy as go on.
"The tragedy of Canada is that they had the perfect opportunity to enjoy French cuisine, British culture and American technology, and instead they ended up with British cuisine, American culture and French technology."
-Anon
I am allowed to say this because I am a Canadian, too.
5956723 haha! That’s a good one. But hey, at least we figured out poutine! ahh, thanks for the laugh.
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I'm not sure I count as a real Canadian as I've never had poutine... But people keep telling me that I always smell like maple syrup, so that probably makes up for it.
5956866 hey, I was 17 before I tried the second best food in the world. Now I look back 14 years and wonder why I waited so log to try it. But everyone has their own tastes when it comes to food.
And fyi, no one food is the best food ever. Currently I have six that occupy the second best slot, including lasagna, battered shrimp, buffalo wings, fried parogies with bacon, cheese, mushrooms and sour cream, and a proper bbqed steak, cooked medium-rare or rare.
Yeah, I know you didn't ask, but I'm at work and feel broke so tough!
5957612 Yeah, it happens. I assume most of them are against mine because it's humanized and I originally was going to have 17 year olds having sex, something that's against the rules here. Weird shit like that seems to make some people really bitchy.
5951968 ... The person who made perhaps one of the greatest Mature harem fics of all time... loved something that I helped edit... there is no greater honor.
5959586 Please you give me far to much credit. But thanks for the compliment.
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Many bronies views Humans in Equestria, the same way many people view bronies, with utter disgust. And as a result they will most of the time not even read the story and just down-vote it. Though poor grammar I find is usually the final nail in the coffin for writers as these people will down-vote it with a passion. Sadly there is quite a lot of snobbery in Fimficition. Many people look down on human and clop as lower writing.
5961379 I can at least understand the grammar side of the situation, but that at least takes reading the story somewhat. I remember my prologue had 7 down votes before it had been online for ten minutes, and you're probably spot on with that logic as to why people down vote stuff.
(to leave Dinky and Ameh) Best not start with a nickname like that, especially if this is the first time we're introduced to the character. Ideally you'll want to have Derpy address her as such, but then follow up with "Amethyst agreed" or something.
Hmm, Rarity is cute with her sister, but maybe a little too cute with how considerate they are of each other's feelings. Oh well. I'm sure you'll contrive some conflict to keep the story awesome.
Good to see the issue with the black lotus is still lingering.
Saw that coming about a third of the way through, but it just goes to show my earlier point of contriving something new and awesome.
(mixture deep into his lungs, burning away a buildup of phlegm in his lungs) It's a little awkward the way you say 'lungs' twice.
I knew it!
Well, Belle is Rarity's daughter, as I suspected. On a minor tangent, I once had a puppy named Belle (she got run over at the age of 6, but I digress), so I've always had an attachment to the name. And I find your incarnation rather adorable, moreso than the canon. So Dusk's little caretaking of her was a heartwarming scene for me.
As for Dusk, well, makes sense the Lotus mucked up his magic pathways, though I don't see him being tempted into taking it again unless the situation is dire. He doesn't display an addictive personality, nor is he an idiot, so to speak. In fact, he's already making plans to compensate for the damage to his magic pathways. I look forward to seeing how that goes. Perhaps Zecora could help, once she arrives. Then again, she's likely the one harvesting Black Lotus, so...