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Great chapter, man. Really enjoyed the way Dusk is bonding with Sweetie Belle and AJ's willingness to make Dash join the herd. Plus, making Lyra return and be capable of teaching children who are aware of her condition was a pretty sweet detail. Thanks for the chapter.
5974472 I was tired, my hot water tank busted and I couldn't get back to sleep for quite a few hours. Plus, I love Cowboy Bebop
5975053 Thanks! Lyra presents a unique challenge and I am so far enjoying the feedback on her presence! And remember, AJ and Dash have a history as lovers of their own!
I was called a space cowboy once. It was from wearing my band uniform. When I told my band director about what the disgruntled football player said, he said "Maybe, but WE'RE the ones who actually won on the field." Ah, it's funny because our football team sucks.
5975449 haha. As someone who has been on both sides of that situation(but not a marching band, just a band), I find most footballers are a little grumpy and rough around the neck, while the band members were often sure they were smarter than they really are. But whatever! Silly crap!
Honestly the whole Dusk Shine, Rarity, and Sweetie Bell moment just stole the show. Granted I find you just do a very good job of making Sweetie Bell adorable.
Looking forward to seeing Zecora who looks to be appearing in the next chapter or two.
5995514 Thanks! I have been avoiding the CMC until now because I'm worried I'd mess it up, but so far I've been quite enjoying the way things are working out so far! Don't worry, everyone's favorite Zebra will be appearing very soon, but not in part 2. It'll probably be in part 3 depending on how long events take. I hope I can make it will be worth the wait!
Zecora smuggles Black Lotus?
6002906 Zecora was seen taking some Black Lotus in an earlier chapter. So, as far as everyone else is concerned, she's a Black Lotus smuggler. As for any other information, you will have to wait and see.
As the protagonist of one of the greatest HiE fics ever once said: "Silly Rainbow. Trixies are for kids!"
Touching how Sweetie longs to have a dad, and cute how she latches on to Dusk as the best candidate.
I shared Rarity's sqee at AJ and RD. But ya know, with all this love that's already existed and that Dusk is catalyzing, it's getting harder and harder to imagine them getting to Tirak without Dusk siring a foal or two. Plenty of reasons why they shouldn't, but the characters you've made don't seem like they'd be able to hold out that long.
Regarding Lyra, the terms you use make her sound more like a futa, yet you say she's trans?