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I really liked this chapter, especially Dusk socializing with Cuddles and giving a bit of info on how he met Cadence and how she first interacted with Shining. It's also funny to see Rarity freak out when she found out about Hoity Toity as she's constantly in control of her emotions most of the time as opposed to her MLP counterpart. The tidbit about Bronze having a trauma about having a certain spot on her hand touch is interesting and Zecora's courting ritual made me laugh due to the confusion and the culture shock. Hope to see th next chapter soon. Also, this chapter is supposed to be part 3, not part 4
It's all over for Mac. He'll find himself at the altar w/ Zecora (and maybe Cheerilee?) soon enough.
I loved how Hoity Toity acted. Reminded me of that other over-the-top stallion from Canterlot Boutique(who's name I don't remember). (He's the one who's Squee-chi's current avatar.)
Truly there are few horrors in this world that compare to high society. Love how Dusk doesn't hesitate to just plainly lay out what's going on for Rarity.
I like how Winona talks. It's pretty much exactly what you'd expect a dog to say.
thRough
I approve Mac x Zecora ship, and the misunderstanding was so adorable.
Confusion lay all around, Zecora just wants her Mac to pound.
Oh well, too late to put anything more coherent here, never mind rhyme.
We need zecora icons.
That's quite the misunderstanding.
6709781 It was fun giving Dusk an excuse to tell stories about Cadence and Shining Armor as foals. Making the Suited for Success story-line more fitting has been a lot of fun as well. As for Bronze? More is coming. As for Zecora and Mac? I think it's fun ^^; Oh and good catch on my goof haha.
6709971 Z+Mac have been a source of some fun for me, so I can't wait to see how this all goes. Hoity Toity is a real card haha. I love the silly crap people come up with, and insane characters can be really fun.
6710091 Dusk is learning that he doesn't quite know what part of the world he fits into. At least the magistrates will make things for Dusk interesting. I feel Dusk is comfortable enough to just speak honestly with Rarity. I love Winona, I should use her more And another great catch!
I'm glad everyone loves Z+Mac, they are a cute background couple.
6710228 We do need Zecora icons. It's a shame.
6711213 It's a bit of a nightmare really. Shows just how much cultures differ.
Ah great, Relationship drama between Zecora and Mac...
And great to see Hoity. :P