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I gotta say: Back when the whole "Miles is dying thing" Popped up I was worried that would be the end. Either with super magicalness bringing him back, (pony magic/ascension) or him just dying, that would be where the story ends so these latest developments have made me quite happy...
I guess in a way he has ascended using pony maker magic... How 'bout that?
Well, at least he hasn't got a black coat and a mane of fire.
....AS JonTron would say.
"OH! I CAN'T STOPPIT!"
SPACEWALKEN.
Well, I guess I'll see where this goes.
-Mis
Alright, I'll bite for now. Also, while on the topic of Miles turning into a pony (or in this case an alicorn)...
I award the usual amount of general praise for this chapter
Why a pony, just why.
I wanna see Luna's reaction to this whole Miles is an alicorn now thing soooo bad
the pervert in me says she's gonna jump him after she gets done freaking out or w/e that he is an alicorn now, I mean if Celestia thought he was hot before realizing it was him...could only imagine what Luna will do
Once again called it... lets see if part two of my prediction is correct. ( outpost zero is a pony conversion devise (which got rid of all the existing humans))
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Thank you for your patients. I know this is a touchy subject for a lot of readers, but please give me a bit to build up to this. It's not what it seems... mostly... kind of... it is, it isn't... you'll see.
Brony on!
2867924 GAAAAAAAHH!! TOO MANY VOWELS!
I get the strangest feeling i know what MIGHT happen.
1. Miles uses this new form to impregnate Luna.
2. Somehow he gets turned back (Hopefully in my case, i'm not a fan of human-turned-pony stories)
Brony On
ps. I might be late to the party on this one but, I really REALLY wish soul fire was real.
Well these new developements are staggering.
Though i can guess alicorndom. He had a shit ton of magic therefore any other pony would not be able to contain the amount of magic build up.
I kinda of guessed this ending having read the last chapter. I saw 'hiding in the closet yet ashes on the bed' and thought... pony
Anyways, i would LOVE it if quickly is a promise
Well *checks left hand for watch*
oh wait it's on the other hand...
yeah it's like 1:30 so i'm going to just end this comment by saying 'Good luck and happy writing!'
After 2 days 2 hours I up to date.......... That is a damm Shameeeeeeeeeeee
Great history and great writing style. But if you Kill Shadow with a Spider You will fell my ICBM.
Cant wait for the next update.
I'll ride this boat for now, but I tend tot get sea sick (I can't help it; I'm bad with boats)
Still, I would like to know how meany other things you had planed.
Was this the your first plan or the fall back?
Now did YOU feel about this?
And why would you hurt me so? Green makes me feel ill.
I only want to know this because reading this car into the story was a commitment, I would hate for this story to get updated and I to see it and only think "Do I really feel like reading this", I want to hate it get updated and just feel to need to jump right in.
Just me trying to get a heading on whats going on
damn... not a dragon...
Hey, he isn't Red and Black so no worries.
I've been following this fic for so long that giving up now because of him becoming an Alicorn, for a plot twist that will become a possible plot twist, would be a completely stupid mistake. So guide into the horrible storm of Alicorn OCs (not making fun of this, just the horrible other fics) and let us see what the hell the ship (story) becomes as we exit (in a good way).
i canr see the keyboar im crying.. i love this story so much it need to be published and showned to the world!!!!!!!! tallest why u hit my feels where it hurts?
Ps: im sad cause i now have to wait for updates.
2867538 I see what you did there.
Now everything makes sense, sortof, maybe not all that much but more sense than two chapters before.
So a pony...okay. Normally I say the fuck away from ponified HIE, but i'll still give this a shot. But I can't seem to wonder that the later chapters have been...subpar. It seems to go downhill by Chapter 100(Well, on my opinion.). I can't say my patience is high right now. It's a far cry from the wonderful first arc you gave us. I don't want a wonderful fic like this to go down. This was one of the first story i read on fimficiton.
I've been following this story for almost year now and it would be freaking stupid for me to give up now.
I'll keep on reading...for now. I hope I won't be disappointed.
I BLOODY CALLED THIS!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!!!!!!
Man I hav a feelin Luna is gonna be pissed that he psuedo-deathed
2867538 Legitimately laughed out loud.
2867893 meh Alicorn OC's don't really bother me, some human turned Alicorn stories can be very good (Fur Streak"What Dose Love Have to Do with it" and another Radiant Dawn's "Rise of the Elements" the latter partially inspired my story) and it is just Mary/Gary Sues (perfect characters without flaw) that bother me and Miles is far from perfect
2871161 That comment.... has made my day.
Brony on!
2874134 Well... yes, but for a different story line. For the main Man of War story line... I guess no. It's foreshadowing things, some that happen now, some in fourth arc, and a few for fifth arc.
2875091 I actually do have someone going back and fixing all of them. We're only twenty chapters in, but we're making good progress if you ask me, And current chapters have a pre-reader/ editor as well.
Well I got a good laugh out of this whole transformation so I'll give it a shot. You've written an amazing story so far; might as well stick with it to the end. Plus this is Miles after all, so the only problems may be a few mishaps and complaints about not having hands.
Well seeing as you wont confirm or deny if he will become human again.. Down vote, unfav and I hope you get cancer.. Was good while it lasted..
172 chapters later... FINALLY FINISHED ! After the lecture of all the chapters (who took me 2 days) I can tell you want I think: Fucking. Good. Story. I don't understand why you don't have more view and more thumb up. I'm French and I find it easy to read (MAY I HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH ?). Good job in here, can't wait to see the next.
2881098 Congrats on completely first arc! Have a
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"Miles", pronounced like the plural form of the unit of measurement, is a name. It's also not a Latin name.
"Miles", pronounced "Me-less", is a name. It is a Latin name.
My point is his character has a Latin name, yet it's being pronounced as an entirely different name.
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I know, I finished reading it like a day after I posted that comment, I've read this story three times now and am reading through a fourth time to edit for TallestBrony.
2881722 To be fair, Latin is vastly mispronounced as it is. Soft c's, using a 'vvv' instead of a 'wuh' etc... Considering that our current culture doesn't care to figure out the proper pronunciation for a language it makes more sense to me that 2000 years from now they take the same liberties with aspects of it.
2868897 Me and TB died laughing as soon as we saw your comment.
2890841 don't worry cheesus you died laughing for our sins. we will see you in three days.
Ok. Now that was an interesting development.
Nice, so based on one persons theory his freinds were turned into ponies so the unfamiliar wouldn't kill them.
There is nothing about a Human in Equestria story that irks me more than when the human is turned into a pony. It just seems that it's never handled right, and feels cheap.
But I love this story too much to stop because of a little pet peeve, so ONWARD TO VICTORY!
...I like this story but this is just such an annoyance.
But I've come too far to stop now, so I will continue
upset? how can I be upset, Miles is alive bitches. have fun haters!
normally i don't like the human turned pony or in this case alicorn but this time i do, his shenanigans will increase from this and ponies will stop asking if gets bigger, but the biggest reason is i have came too damn far to turn back now
Out of all the human turned alicorn stories this is the ONLY one where the human truly deserves it.
And of course all the antics have been doubled thanks to it
Motherfucker you just made me read this fic for FOUR hours! Just so I could get arc two done. And what do I get?
Miles as an Alicorn, a Milicorn you could say...
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...and you magnificent fucker made it work...
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...just... just fuck you... how is someone even able to do something like this?!
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...fuck it. From now, I shall call you TB The Magician.
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I wholeheartedly agree with this statement.
*holds out two Stout Shakos on top of his frying pan*
Both of you, HeimoBauss and TB, take one. I'll even throw in a free paint of your choice
(No I will not literally give your TF2 inventory a stout shako, I can't find a single crate with one in it, let alone give any out for free...haven't had one in a year, sadly)
Edit: Took me about 12 hours to finish Arc Two from my original position... I have way too much free time since I've been stuck with only my phone for internet connection.
My POV concerning the transformation of miles.
Human to Pony transformations usally get me off a story, especially when it happens near the beginning.
HOWEVER... Since Miles went through 2 arcs with various adventures dangers and eventual coming close to death etc, It feels justified.
As of now I don't much care if he stays like this, can switch between 2 forms, or returns to be human, this is a change I can welcome, it adds new possibilities for later and can bring new comedy aspects into the story.
Miles would need to learn:
- how to fly
- how to use magic
- how to grap stuff with his hooves
I see lots of possible comical interventions here
You did it, didn't you? You just had to do it. You had to.... just..... GAH!
You know what, I'm just gonna roll with it for now. I don't like the change. I may never like it, but I like the characters and story, so I'll stick with it. Maybe I'll grow to enjoy it. You have more than earned a chance at making this amazing as you have so far accomplished, despite what my or others personal opinions may be. It is your story, after all.
Homeostasis has been broken. I like it!