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Seems to be a lot of grammar errors in this chapter. I've gotten used to reading "thee" as "the" but in a few places even "thee" isn't there.
Also, right here:
"Storm, if you can, watch over my place, and let Applejack I might be a tad late for work." I yell out to him.
You the sentence.
"That was your job, he's under my watch now. I'm taking him to Ponyville to keep a close eye on him."
You mean Canterlot?
you need a proofreader.
also, why does everypony think Miles is trying to kill them at first?
482022thanks for pointing that out.
482467 it is his history of violence and the fact he killed before.
483262 even th' ones he's never me think that.
shipping with luna? how is clestia gonna react?
483267 ??? translation?
I suppose I'll jump on the grammar Nazi bandwagon. "Bearings" instead of "Barrings." I'm sure there are more but that is the only one that stuck out to me. It's not something that usually bugs me. Probably because I make twice as many mistakes whenever I write something. Luckily my wife is the greatest proof reader ever.
I really needed someone to put Shining Armor in his place after yesterday. Something about him just annoyed me, I don't know why. Hopefully Miles will have the same effect he had on Storm Cloud and get him to lighten up. I don't want to dislike Shining Armor but I do. I think it's probably just because he fell for succubus and never really apologized for it. Part of me just wants Miles to go medieval on his butt.
Celestia is pretty well dead to me too for that matter. I love how she told Twilight that she "learned a very valuable lesson about trusting your instincts," but never said, "I'm sorry for basically shunning the crap out of you even though you were right the whole time." And then when it came time to battle she got her ass handed to her.
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Sorry needed to get some of that out. Outstanding chapter! As always, looking forward to more.
483272 ...i have no idea what my fingers were doing there. i'm honestly as confused as you.
483280 Epic response.
483287 thank you.
483271 try and murder him probally... all i know is if she finds out there is going to be shit hitting the fucking wind turbine.
483298 Yeah that was pretty funny, and to end the argument, why would they treat him like that? He nearly blew up PONYVILLE! Big explosions call for big responses.
483308 oh shit....what if he goes pony? and by pony i mean alicorn.
483315 ahh, but blowing stuff up is fun. anyone who says otherwise is a stuffy old prude.
483320Hey! I sent you an email, RESPOND!
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483345 Nice.
483347 GAH! Not what I meant!
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But Ponyville gets blown/destroyed on a regular basis. . .
This has quickly become my favorite story on this site. I love how Miles has already established who wears the pants in his and Shining Armor's relationship, even going as far as insulting him in front of his own wife. Miles don't take nothing from no one! Perfect. Keep it up, mate, I check this story daily!
Damn I pass out before 12 a few nights in a row and people notice
Geez Shining is pulling the Jackass cap on. (Things better get better or else (You don't want to know what or else is.)
well, i was reading this chapter and waiting him to pull "bitch please, my power level is OVER 12000!!" card, but he fared better.
Rent-a-Cop
Best nickname for shinning armor yet!
Canterlot; here we come!
Shining Armor JUST GOT TOLD LOL
Wow, bitchestia in the house!!!! This IS some serious BS. He fucking saves a life and ponyville yet he's sorta punished? Blasphemy! It wasn't entirely his fault. The reporter didn't have to follow him but she did. ITS ALL HER FAULT! Lolz awolnation reference.
Fuck.Shining. Wouldn't mind seeing him bested.
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You haven't read Diaries of a Madman yet...
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HAHAHA, thats not Celestia, thats a sadist in disguise!
I forsee shining armor getting his as kicked by miles in the future
This is frustrating me, Luna is a princess, like Celestia is a princess, Luna should have the same authoritah as Celestia, yeh she is older and can give good advice, but there at equal standing. But in this Fic she treated as a lesser then Celestia and has no say.
First comment on fimfiction and it's a grammer Nazi post. My friends would be so proud off me. You've written becuase 2 times in the chapter instead of because. Hope it helps.
The guy was beating the shit out of that snare drum in the song.
That poor drum....
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There is another I there. Remove one
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Question mark after manners.
You keep misspelling because.
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You keep misspelling because.
shinning?
Shining.
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Calm the fuck down, grammar Nazi!
The magical land of Equestria: something is trying to kill you every other minute and defending yourself or others will see you chained and caged like an animal. Because fuck even the barest semblance of logic.
I should like to know why Luna bothers sticking around at the castle at all. It's quite clear Celestia sees her as a ward rather than co ruler and she apparently doesn't have any actual authority beyond whatever Celestia deigns to allow her (and can revoke on a whim).
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Calm down, Mister "off". You ain't perfect either.
No. Fifteen to twenty seconds.
He is losing to many pieces of clothing.
im sort of confused now
5957538 Fire kills clothing
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Aww why you make shining a dick
No one else did it? Yes! I can do it first!
You know, I guess he's right about not even thinking about bullets not harming dragons. How would he know that sharp pieces of metal flying at a speed close to the speed of sound wouldn't harm them?
Wow i have never wanted to punch someone, but I have that really bad feeling that I just want to DECK Shining, and...Surprisingly, Celestia
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Most likely faster, though idk exactly how his guns work.