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Oh snap! This is what I have been waiting for! Full on badass spartan war.
Now imagine Spartans with MESH Beam Power Smart Dust Clouds. Billions of point source energy transponder manipulators.
Techmagic nanoswarm.
Things are going to get very messy, because Miles has all this lot, but this lot exists because the enemy has an equivalent in opposition, otherwise they wouldnt be a wet paper bag, never mind an enemy.
Being the agressor grants advantage here. First strike allows for the best chance to catch the enemy unaware. But it also grants the enemy propaganda for the political war. Fence sitters are more likely to side against an agressor and allies might be more hesitant to back such a dangerous move.
yesssss lets bring the PAIN!!!
ah I get a nice chill in my back whenever my OC comes up
And so begins the war...
DELICIOUS BABY~ Muhahahaha!
Nice job man.
All us readers just sitting here like i.ytimg.com/vi/iSfQNPCR69U/maxresdefault.jpg
7680912 And like zat, ze var begins.
It's been so long since we saw the Spartans, I forgot half of their names.
Finally
in maybe 4 to 5 years do you wanna animate this? judging on my animation skills by then?
You know i love this story but it is a nightmare to lose where you where, i read a ton of it as an epub and i have no idea where i was, eh Ill find it.
Screw it, at this point I'd be better off just reading from the beginning again.
Never mind chapter 161 found the epub that i havent seen in almost a year.
So if they send all their assets to attack the enemy, who will be their to protect the homeland? Miles better not risk Celestia and Luna again :P
Can't wait for more chapters
7702130 ever read diaries of a mad man? Isn't so surprising then
I like the story, and it has gotten much better with the spelling and grammatical errors. There is still misuse of words as well as minor grammatical errors that should still be fixed. Prime example: ""Because... that isn't moral?" That didn't sound too confident." Should be "that is immoral" rather than "Isn't moral." Makes much more sense in that manner, as well as when Miles replies.
As I said though, I like how it's gotten better, but there's still slight issues that really bug me.
7744600 lol
7750295 nope close but not close it was from the magic school bus lel
7768721 Hey, man! That was 16 weeks ago and I was very tired!
7783744 That is quite the comment sir,
Brony on!
7803258 Fillyfooler, not marebian...
7805866 Same difference
If you ask me, Miles and Luna both wasted a major opportunity here. Luna especially.
Personally i would have carried the corpse out in chains, claiming to have found evidence of treason and that I had to incapacitate him. After that, it's either claiming he was charged in closed court and summarily sentenced, carried out immediately, or that he was incarcerated somewhere that would be inaccessible to anyone else. After all, who would be able to say different. Besides, that would have the dual effect of scaring anyone else involved in the embargo, at least one individual would panic and slip up i would think.
Surely that would be a better plan than showing thier hand before they were ready?
8101688
This man thinks with portals. But hey, at least story progression