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CLEANSE THE EVIL
DAMN BRO!
I knew it was gonna be harsh, but damn...
I mean... Damn.
Like seriously, damn.
FINALLY THAT GUY WAS FUCKING ANNOYING AS HELL!
I imagined Breaker going out in a much filthier manner. . .
Its a TRAP!
dude! fucking epic! and a 8000+ word chapter too!
562079 i know how this is going to go... either he already took advantage of twilight or he aint dead and was prepared for that...
i swear if he aint dead please make him come back later just so he can get his flank handed to him be miles,storm cloud,and anybody around ther skill level.
he deserves FAR more then just a simple neck snap...
but... "RUN MOTHER FUCKERS RUN! I DON'T MISS TWICE YOU ASSHOLES, RUN!" i was thinking of a drill instructer wehn that came up. if that was the point you succeded...
Thats how you do, now you gotta go down there, find his corpse and get somepony with aids to piss in his eye socket
I would have chopped off his wings and dropped him to the ground!
yes hes finally dead, and now we have three Spartans in the story cool nice long chapter man keep it up.
Of course he would end up with the old armor. Bastard.
Part of me hopes he's alive so they can bring him to Miles who can go all Freddy Krueguer on him for the rest of his life.
breaker: this is blastephamy this is MADNESS!
cloud: madness....
THIS
IS
SPARTA
(SNAPS BREAKER'S NECK)
should have let him live only to live an eternity of torture at the hands of miles.
loved the chapter
Should of let Miles fight Breaker. I don't even want to know what he would have done *shudders*
563977 OH MY GOD YOU STARTED!
Haha finally!
Miles sounds like Franklin Mendez who trained the halo Spartans
It's about bloody damn time Breaker got what he deserved!
BUCK YEA!!
562342 i would have ripped him in half and made him give him self a blow-job
or just send agent tex after him both are equally bad
quote from indipendence day FTW
what rank lieutenant is miles? first or second
Kick that bitch's ass storm cloud!!!!!
2393147 Since he's the XO, most likely a First Lieutenant.
I have a feeling breaker had a back-op plan...
Holy shit this Chapter man Lol keep up the great work
I was KINDA hoping that twi gets
*gasp*I'm bad!
....
My Insanity and Rage: "May we?"
Me: "Go on."
Insanity and Rage: *ahem* "That is not how he was supposed to be killed"
...
"This is..."
...
"First Storm takes the mace while holding Breaker in headlock. He starts slowly pushing the mace inside Breakers asshole until it starts leaking enough blood to cover the mace. Then he advances to smashing each and every bone of Breakers body, followed by slowly ripping off his wings, slicing them into pieces at the same time. Then Storm starts to slowly rip his penis off, making sure that he crushes the whole crotch area of Breakers at the same time. He then feeds the ripped off dick to Breaker, making sure to force it down as hard as possible. He will start slicing small, long cuts on Breakers back with his sword he got back in some way, it doesn't matter. He will slice the eyelids and rip off the teeth by slicing the gums open. Storm then proceeds to twist each limb around 720 degrees and ripping them off too, leaving only the torso and head, then he will gouge out Breakers eyeballs and feed them to him, while slicing the stomach open and feeding them and the penis to him again, this time making him chew until each piece is just mush. The last thing he says to Breaker is "Always better than you, you fucking worthless piece of retard Satan's dirty hairy asshole being mauled by the filthiest trolls born from shit."
...
"There! All done, thanks!"
Me: "That's still not bad enough..."
Edit: 31.12.2014
I have no idea what kind of drugs I had taken when I wrote this but that shit seems hard and I want some... or maybe not considering what I wrote.
Edit: 11.5.2015
I have also come to believe that I had serious mental issues when this comment was written and I would consider it under the section of level 16 in "fuck up". Research will go on.
first of all: tare isn't a word, you're looking for tear, also a duel is a fight. if you're looking for something with two parts it's dual
I still don't think that twenty one days is enough for the kind of training that they should have gotten but... meh. I'm a bit late.
Can't help but think of Independence Day every time I read this.
Too bad it's Sunday, I want to read more.
If Spartan Training actually existed... *Shivers*
...
...
...
That actually sounds fun. I want to try it out.
4037368 some of it dos seal training I think when it comes to the bag over your head part the days with out sleep are marine not sure about the rest.
'bout time the rat bastard died! If it were me, I'd rip his throat out with my teeth.
4042375 ever heard of hell week? The Spartan training did the marine verson. BUD/S is much harder.
Storm breaker needs to DIE IN A FIRE!
3248730 holy shit
Well that would be a training for me. As hard and as brutal as it could be.
3248730 pretty sure he will passout from the pain right at the beginning
5221691 thats to badass of a death for a cowardly bitch like him
Second time reading this, still freaking great.
5851185 same here, great story, just as good the second time around.
3248730 tell me yo dealer sells PCP, cause thats the only way i think i could understand what you wrote, also, unless your really really careful, or as good at healing as miles is, hes gonna pass out, maybe die before half of that. unless you get that drug pinkie had in Cupcakes, the one the blocks pain but keeps you awake, so even if he doesn't feel it, he is still gonna see it.
563983 seriously, how do you handle all the crazy comments people make?
562999 yes, yes this is Sparta!
Good riddance
I would thumbs up most of these comments, but that would take to long and I want to read.
On a personnel note to Cloud Breaker
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Just a guess here, but Storm Breaker either knocked her up or she was already pregnant.
Reading this scene again makes me think back to Full Metal Panic's "Gauron".
I can just imagine Breaker, mid fall, using his last breath to say "I love you, brother." In a really twisted manner.