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Holy crap this story can last me a month
The unfamiliar are the reason miles species is extinct, this is payment for their crimes.
Too many words... can't continue...think my brain might just explode...
4691586 Agreed. When you realize your the last of your kind, no longer able to see or interact with another of your kind forevermore, you want revenge on the ones that made you an extinct species. They are lucky they aren't all dead. Hopefully he reminds the others of that fact.
Miles has the right to exact judgement on the species that made his extinct. I agree. They are lucky they are not dead.
I am going to disagree with Miles. Holding the unfamiliar ransom to the past is barbaric. The Kroth ancestors were to blame not their descendants. Forgive but never forget and then move on.
Besides the author might have an ace hidden up his sleeve.
Damien is a fucking prick. The Unfamiliar are guilty and have crimes to atone for, namely the extermination a species, the ponies are innocent and are being used to fuel a war, or at least weapons of war. Why the fuck would anyone in their right mind not want to free them?
If it was up to me the Unfamiliar would be so much floating greasy ash on the wind right about now if they were not making themselves useful as they are.
That Goblin is working in such a way, that U40 and freinds are likely to not be alive when Miles returns. Simple trade, force the Sparten to break his promis, causing him to fall in grace to the others, against losing maybe one percent of production capacity fr a week or so?
How many innocents permissable to kill is all in what you decide to leave out of the payback computer model.
Or, as was pointed out in the first movie.
A Strange Game. The Only Way To Win, Is Not To Play.
Darwin's law bitch! Survival of the fittest. The weaker species dies off and the strong survive.
4691425 And guns. And Rapist Blud Fetishest Luna. And Trollestia. And Flo. And Taya.
Well. This went downhill fast.
This is going to be good. Extremely good. War is the answer here, nothing else, I believe it is time we see the rise of a new world power! This war will be glorious! *gets popcorn*
This is need...more....FEEL!
Dont they fucking have basic rights? like everyone has the right to be free and without harm? I mean basic laws for everyone are the foundation for a peaceful coexisting. Are all these races too retard to come up with that?
Yes crime will probably never fade because people dont want to go the hard way through life, they want to be lazy. so why pay for enchanters if he just can say i let you life if you work for me. Sad shit is going on. I think he should let Equestria deal with their ponys. Celestia will make demands to let them free for blablabla i am not the author... just find a reasonable solution
great chapter by the way I know that in many countries , slavery is still existend but i hate slavery and that it probably never will go away...
We need more chapters focused around miles in my opinion. But great chapter
If I served under miles and he said. "Hey, get ready to fight"
I'd just say.
"Who do I kill?"
This is the best birthday surprise i've ever had.
4694986 And I would say: "Who do I eat?"
haaaa stormtroopers
Fuck yes WAR! http://youtu.be/KUB9QGKCNmI
No idea how they do those video links oh well.
Well, this is a very strange turn of events. Miles keeps slaves, but is against slavery.
Well, fuck it right? Kill everything.
4696974 Ballsack to you, sir!
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Keep in mind that it is not these Unfamiliar that had done it. It was their ancestors to be sure but ancestors from a few thousand years ago. Its basically blaming the Caucasians of today for slavery... its a metaphor for racism.
4704889 what I'm saying is that he was THERE for it, you can't blame him for his intense hatred and if any of us were in his shoes, we probably would have straight up killed the unfamiliar
4713779 The bat is made of cotton candy.
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It sucked the whole way, it "not being done" means nothing in this case.
Diaries of a Mad Man is almost as bad as this fic and I finished it too.
Length =/= quality of any form. This fic was sub-par all the way through in both technical and literary quality.
4717704 Seriously, if I don't like a story, i decide that in the 1st-2nd chapter. And hell yeah, this fic is getting even more interesting than before. I also can't wait for the 1m words special if he does it.
Hmm... it's hard to decide which way to swing with this. On one hand, I understand Miles hate for the Unfamiliar. But on the other hand, he's being no better than what he's aiming to stop right now. See despite all the spelling and grammar errors this story has had and some of the things that made me bash my head on my laptop. What's holding me and interesting me with this story is the fact that the Author has created a character (Miles) Who seems to have an almost shifting Morality I suppose. There's another way I want to put it but I can't quite think of it at the moment. Either way Miles as a character feels.. well actually more REAL than most in a fic.
Any one person here, weather they wish to admit it or not, would have the same view on the Unfamiliar as he does. I may be wrong but I don't believe I am. I believe that it would be hard for anyone here to just say "Well it's all in the past, let's move on" No... I don't believe in slavery either but I do believe that in his situation I couldn't simply allow them to slide off with a firm talking to. I think it's more complex than a simple metaphor for racisim, at least in this case. It'd be hard to just let bygones be bygones as some people here think.
Not only that this keeps him from being the lovable character everyone will want to get laid by. The conflict that arises due to the cultural differences between Miles and the rest of the species of Equestria is what really makes this story worth reading. Again, because it just feels more real to me.
4717723 The only thing that almost pushed me away from this is the constant grammar and spelling errors. But then I just shrugged, got over it and missed quite a few of them because my brain just... ignored them lol. You and I both are anxious for this. Jesus to think I spent nearly 5 days reading this all to catch up. But it was worth it to see a REAL character who is both loved and hated and has a REAL Personality. Rather than some cut and paste "Everyone loves me, I'm bucking every one of the mane 6 and the princesses hur hur! I can do no wrong!"
4717866 Yeah, this story is much more realistic than most.
4725651 Christians, it's great that you believe in a god that lets children starve, freeze, be forced into prostitution/sex slavery, get addicted to drugs, be beaten, neglected, and abused, and what not, but, religion isn't a dick. Don't shove it down our throats or make it part of your story.
I had a much longer comment but fimfiction deleted ALL
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Sidenote, know any good stories?
4744152 How could you? I actually (slightly) enjoyed it. If only because it gave me a lot of reading material.
4769108 that's bad too kinda makes me sad knowing what's gonna happen
DAMN IT. I can't believe I caught up here. Of all places here. Damn It. This is the most interesting part of the story. I mean his should really focus more on watching Terradisia grow.
ps. what would he even pay the unfamiliar with they kind of do there own thing
4793873 google translate bro, can't help it
only problem with the writing is the present tense use. i'm not used to reading a story in present tense first so that could be the reason. other then that everything is awesome but...it could be 20% cooler
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Yeah, I understand totally. That being said: if you had any editors while writing this, they weren't doing their job fixing the "to/too/two", "your/you're" and "its/it's" mix-ups or ownership/plural apostrophe errors.
THAT being said, I wouldn't be this far into the story if I wasn't enjoying it. You did nearly lose me with Storm's whole fiasco in chapter 167 (*shudder*, I found that less bearable than anything in Diaries), but I stuck through.
211 chapters...you can stop anytime you like. Really. Nobody would blame you.
4813928 It kind of is a game. Check out my blogs about ponyrun.
Brony on!
After 215 chapters I'm finaly there. And it only took me the better part of two weeks. As Damian would say, WORTH IT!
4793117 everyone needs resources of some kind. Hell if I remember right they are meat eaters terradissian food goop might keep then alive down there but it's mainly tasteless. Get them some fresh food and trade it for huge profit. Like the spice trade back in the 17th century.
4694357 Exactly how long did it take for our world to recognise human rights on a global scale? Excactly how long did it take for every country to agree and follow them? What? Hasn't happened yet. Now, what is supposed to make them better than us?
Also I will admit I sound condescending and I am sorry for that. Your question just got the better of me.
4827910 doesn't change the fact that it's freaking bad or?
slaves.....why is there always ssomething going towards slavery when I see a story I get interested in XD
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Exactly! This is why we should let the Jewish community kill all living Germans. And the Native Americans should exterminate all non native Americans. Oh don't forget we need to wipe out all Chinese because of what Mao did. But not before taking out the Japanese for the rape of Nanking. Actually, we'll need to exterminate a good portion of all Asians because a large number are descended from Genghis Khan, but DNA tests will make that easy.
After all, it's only fair. Those people deserve to be punished for the evil of their ancestors.
Miles really have to think hard about this one he can't go to war because some of them are slaves he has his own slaves because he's not paying them they building things for him and they're not paying. It's true that it killed his people but just to be working for him and not getting paid that's slavery he should know better so he can really go to war unless he gives them a good reason for it