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YES! knew it was gunna go like this! several people owe me quite a bit of money now.
also, how long until Celestia and Miles figure out who th' other is?
Man you are awesome three chapters in three days. This is going to get good fast.
i will see if it is time for me to collect my bets... also the story is like i said before good. and so far it is getting better.
I thought for sure this would be the one. And because I knew with absolute certainty that Celestia would have to meet Miles face to face, there was no way it would happen.
....Now you're doing it on purpose....
Excellent as always puppet master. You pull the strings and I dance for you.
*salute*
Whoa. . . I picked that memory? I'm speechless. . .
467280 Imagine the other ones
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I can honestly say that I'd probably be less disturbed by murder than rape.
Don't get me wrong I like the chapter, and I love the story. I just wish that rape wasn't. . . well. . . rape.
Only thing more disturbing to me is cannibalism. As long as there's no people eating people in this story. All is made of gold. (I don't think ponies even have the teeth for cannibalism so. . . yeah)
*Phew* Found your story last night, and spent most of the night yesterday and all of the night today reading it, now I'm caught up, and I don't know what to do!
In all seriousness, everything about this appeals to me in every way, every chapter has just been completely awesome, and I really can not wait for the next chapters!
phew, im glad i didnt bet, why do i always see a riddle in everything?????????
it seems there is only one girl and 3 dudes.
Nope, going to sleep alone and then waking up with your sister cuddling you in your bed isn't weird at ALLL
It would be cool if you did a chapter on what happened after miles was sent to the future. To his old friends that is. Like one confesses that he tried to murder miles but murdered tempus and them instead. Then fidus comes out and says that the other three guys raped her and all that jazz.
2544480 If you wake up and your little sister is cuddled next to you, it doesn't matter HOW old you both are. You just lay back down and wait for her to wake up.
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Unless you're nude, then you bet dressed and grab a book. By the way, what does your picture's cutie mark mean? That's not dark magic is it? That means transmutation right!?!
Hmm, 2 Miles!
I just realized that some of these comments are over three years old. I began reading this story a month after it came out. (On a different account, I forgot the username)
...I feel old now.
I almost feel there are too many references to rape in this story. It's not necessarily a bad theme to cover, but you shouldn't become blasé about the topic. I think the scene with Fidus would have had more impact if we hadn't already had to deal with the rapist Storm and minotaur. At the very least, Miles should have been much more sensitive/upset about the topic earlier seeing how this memory is only a few weeks old to him.
A week.
7 miles of Luna-less Celestia, while both of them are in a unknown homered comatose state.
She must have been so scared.
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For me its six years and i feel even older
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*laughs* ditto
Я надеюсь что Майлз не окажется придурком в дальнейшем, а пока его можно понять. И это я про Луну говорю. Что?