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3516289 Thanks for that. I didn't take them from anything, so as far as I know they're original.
Brony on!
Ergh *_* you just had to give the kid an ominous name, didn't you.
So, what is it this time? Some ass-pirate villain of the week kills him which sends Miles into berserk mode thus fully turning him into the titular Man of War?
Or maybe TM "dies" and joins the ranks that Mile's mom belongs to?
Or, maybe TM's "early death" is because he's mortal rather then an immortal alicorn.
Or maybe he's forced to pull the ultimate sacrifice?
I think I'll stop at that.
I LOVE IT
you sure came up with a good name for him, dark yet good...can't wait to see how this story unfolds
Griffins or Unfamiliar?
The one who kills the baby, I mean.
HAHAHA!!! I TOLD YOU I'D GET TO THE "END" OF THIS BEFORE SEASON 4 STARTS! AAAAAHAHAHAHAAAaaaa~I'll just shut up...
...
For a second.
That... that actually makes a lot more sense than it should. Also, small grammatical error there, isn't it supposed to be "pony's" not "ponies"? Oh, and about the grammar, get an editor/proofreader, it's painful to read some sentences... and English ain't even my national language.
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...I'm not sure if that's fucking badass or just bad...
Anyways:
Holy shit! Your ideas are freaking perfect on this story. Sure there are points that make this story a lot worse than it should be (*cough*grammar*cough*), but those won't really matter... that much. To sum up this story so far, I'd say;
Shit's going down hard with nice and well timed humor. Good job.
Also, fuck Damian, lol
Read his name as a proffession instead the literall meaning.
It's about time this story was featured.
You know for a first time dad Miles comes across as weak. Where is the emotion? The tears? And those are supposed to be my reactions. Sorry, it just felt flat.
until the fire nation attacked.
I forsee... someone pulling a Leroy Jenkins. I don't know who, but it's bound to happen.
3516688 I get featured every time I update... not trying to sound pretentious, just saying.
Alfredo is awesome. Miles should definetly try some... And damn Celestia, that long? Go ahead girl, enjoy the alfredo... You know you want to.
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Haha, I guess I'm just never on when it happens. Either way still one of my favorite stories on here after 199 chapters and looking forward to number 200.
WAy to be racist celestia, how do you know they have the same college system hmm? people can stay for 8 years, have to i mean, for certain degrees.
*beats celestia over the head with logic* take that!
3520218 Even if it took eight, he was there for sixteen.
3520866 twice the knowledge! get a masters in two subjects!
3520994 That statement is one hundred percent true. It applies while on Terra. Terra, referring to the planet, not the country Terradisia. It gets explained more later, much later, but the Spartans are suppose to be an outside force, Terradisia was just their host nation.
3517692 same here lol
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love it i may draw littie one and have for your fan art he he just u what lol anyway, have a great and derpy day
3529712 yes i rembered quite some time ago ha ha. just never bothered to go change it.
and it's agent K
Since I have devoured the sheer enormous Tale of "Diaries of a Madman" (1.2 million words so far), and am now waiting for further updates I will indulge myself with the story that has currently the most chapters (199 chapters? yes please).
Oh boy, this will take a while!
This story is grate! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
3539579 cats have 9 lives correct?
I'm half cat and i'm on my last leg here...
3539815 My bad.
To cute
So, how do earth ponies and pegasi name their children?
Also, Timely needs a nickname.
YES IV FINALLY CAUGHT UP!!!!!! IT ONLY TOOK FOREVER BUT I DID IT. Onto another subject though....
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He's going to kill death isn't he?
*Twenty seven years later*
Tempestive Mortem: Oh butler!
Butler: Yes my lord?
Tempestive Mortem: I think I'm going to see what my mother was like in the past.
Butler: My Lord! That's dange-
Tempestive Mortem: Don't worry, she wont know it's me. i'll use a disguise.
And this start's the rise of the Four Riders. Amusing right? Still, I feel really bad about what his name means.
If Miles and Luna have a daughter, I DARE YOU to name her Mortem Omnibus.
4386756 death to all is actually mortem omni and jeez how about calling her vita omni it's sounds more feminine and means life to all.
4435618 Now that I think about it, yeah. But I like Vivificantern better.
Fuck you google translate! It translated to 'Early Death' and my heart stopped but it's all okay now as 'timely' means 'favorable or useful' so he will have a 'favorable death' meaning at a good time, in,say, 100 millennia!
3516507 Pony's is a short version of pony is I think
4660479 or that is what he will bestow apon his enemies.
I just realized Tempestive looks almost exactly like my OC character
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WORTH IT!
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Apostrophes can also show possessives
Tempestive is going to be fine. It means he's not going to die too soon. If his name was Untimely Death, then I'd be worried.
I wanna see the part this baby wipes out the whole enemy army
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ikr
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OOOO thats true
This is a dilemma because the babies name is untimely death end it sounds a little bit menacingly but your dilemma either we're killing baby Hitler or we're killing baby Lincoln a hard decision kill or save fight or mercy