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Wow. Two in a day. You're too kind to us. And I'm not sure which mortifies me more, the future meeting with Celestia, or what's about to happen now....Luna, save us again!
I like apple jacks approach to it, You just gotta get up there and derp ugh ugh uggggh
EEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Goodness me! That ending is the BEST! POSSIBLE! THING! Please pleasepleaseplease PLEASE do another chapter with wine in it in the future! Oh it's GLORIOUS!
Mustache to you sir. Nono, TEN MUSTACHES!
Let me get this straight. Mile drugged the girls while he was drunk?
Dat wine....
oh god im almost afraid to read the next chapter
"I-I umm... I've never had... you know... sex. I'm still a virgin."
Yeah, because Luna would just blurt that out just like that
Miles:* drinks a few cups of wine before learning of its effects*Damn, my balls itch...
Mane six: we would love to scratch that itch!
Lots and lots of grammar errors here, mostly your/you're mistakes...
Let the games begin...
all we need is....
2628050 The cloudgment is strong with this one.
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Ok, I know I'm early in the story... But I'm pretty horrified at how the romances are going. Mostly the Twilight / Storm thing. She instantly starts falling for him the moment we learn he has a crush, they share no interests and actively dislike each other's traits. The only hiccup is that he appears identical to (and shares a name with) a pony that she was dating that tried to rape her. That entire romance is just plain wrong...
Miles attraction to Luna is similarly unrealistic. I just mean the physical attraction though. He shows no attraction to other ponies, so it's not some latent xenophillic reaction; and he doesn't know her well enough for it to be an emotional one. I can get Luna getting hot and bothered. He's attracted to her and she's inexperienced. But there's no reason for him to like her...
These two romance simply destroy my suspension of belief. Miles likes Luna because the story needs him to love her. The Twi/Storm thing is so screwed up I just want to give up and walk whenever it comes up. Which is a real shame, because I really like the rest of the story.
Anyway, here's hoping that Twilight and company grow a clue and kick Storm to the curb, and Miles finds an actual reason to fall for Luna.
I can't wait to see the reaction between Celestia and Miles when they meet again...
So how did Luna's mom die, the story said he was held for the murder of two and it was obviously her. Hmmmm.
5351714 your comment makes 0% sense
5351714 wut
... was the cross dressing really necessary?
NOOOOO HE WAS TOO YOUNG!
5636349 Two guys, both soldiers at a girls slumber party, then we figure out the wine's drugged and that's the weirdest thing that happens? Honestly, i'm impressed.
Of course, the internet may have broken certain parts of my brain over the years...so, who knows.
is she talking about what I think she's talking about, and define too rough, she's a virgin, and being too rough would be what?
Okay, I'm confused. When was the wine magically altered, and why does everyone assume Miles did it?
OK this is pretty good now love the lore and celestia was adorable but he's like celestias and Lunas uncle and idk about you but I'm getting the vibes from him and just gotta say them getting 'together' would be beyond fucked please don't do that to us its not incest but it's like close and I don't like it. BUT OTHER THAN THAT YESSSS THIS WAS GOLD