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MOAR!
EDIT: Piss off first fag
Haha I finally caught up
Miles is so proud he bested twilight with his penis
lol he found the source of the alicorns!
...I will find you and fucking kill you if you DARE to make her cry again(please note I'm just overreacting to this because I'm slap happy)
*TIME TRAVEL!!!!*
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WHERE IS SHARA CONNOR!!! *German garble*
AHAHAHHAHAHAH
will we see his friends again?
This chapter was terrible...
the most important aspects of a HIE are Back-story, Character design and the meet'n greet.
1. Was cliche and overdone but whatever.
2. Das good.
3. *Walks out of teh room*
...
Typical government answer
YAY Finally the main character doesnt give a flying fuck about anyone else and trys to run from the ponies :D
Nudity saves the day, HURRAH!
Wow... Okay, let's do this!
Miles reaction towards the ponies completely blindsides us. We initially get a sense of difference, but when comparing Fluttershy to the pony(ies) he has encountered. It is not clear whether the ponies of Terra are The Royal Pony Sisters, or if it's some kind of natural thing due to magic or what.
We also have no idea why he reacts to the ponies like he does. He's an arcane soldier, so give us a flashback or vision or something. Warriors generally tend to have nightmares and traumas from their time on the battlefield. So, give us something that helps us to understand Mile's reaction to the ponies. Because without providing some background understanding for why he reacts to the ponies the way he does, it makes these reactions come across as "coming from left field," as it were. It makes the events following seem as though it's simply contrived and inserted in to give the protagonist some kind of issue/ problem/ dilemma, to act/ react to, instead of being an organic part of the story.
Not even Twilight can withstand a full frontal assault!
the feel when mac has a frag in his mouth that made my day lol great chapter and ya his in Equestria now
-20 points for griffondor! making Fluttershy cry...
What the hell!? He's running from ponies, apparently he's seen alicorns, and he keeps mentioning something about being hanged or some shit. What the fuck is going on!? Did I miss something?
Seriously, what the fuck kind of phone is that? Please don't give Apple any ideas...
Can't wait to find out what he messed up during the negotiations with those "ponies".
Ah, THERES the ponies!
You made fluttering cry
I'm not mad
*sharpens knife*
not mad at all..
Well this'll be fun
Who the fuck has a phone thats 18 cm long? And how can he put it in his pocket?
i know it's early in the story, but I really wanted to point this out:
I'm loving this chapter because of his initial reaction. Since we know nothing of the ponies he knows of, it makes his reaction extremely hard to understand and even over-the-top. However, because we don't know about the ponies he knows about except through vague references, his reaction is intriguing and making me more curious. Honestly, I think you handled this perfectly. I can't wait to read on and discover why he is so worried about getting hanged
Ugh, it started off right, but then all of a sudden he is just so accepting of everything and is just allowed to put on his armor while the ponies watch. Pretty sure applejack would of been rarin to go.
lest see you make shy cry in the first chapter that has ponies, big mac almost dies, and AJ seams to be into some bondage yep I think im going to like it here
YOU MADE FLUTTERSHY CRY! BUT you won't be killed . . . yet.
3730055 First question: Future. It can probably do much more than phones today and might be run on magic. Second Question: magic.
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Damnit. Jared get me my Chainsaw-
-Kicks down the authors door-
HERE'S CHARLIE!!!!!!!!!!!
Don't worry about that. By the laws of physics something bad will invariably happen for making Fluttershy cry, so don't worry about it. Also, this fanfic is AWESOME!
At first, I thought he was on earth... but from the future with a bunch of aliens. What I didn't expect was for there to be talking ponies there already.
Man I love chase scenes.
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Alright, this chapter was confusing as all-fuck. (Also, I feel like it was really rushed.)
I like the idea, but I just find a lot of it rushed at spme parts or pverly explained at others. I read a lot of this stpry begore but I just can't do it again.
So she's facing you (AKA butt facing AWAY), you sneeze in her face. She backs up and somehow her ass is magically in your lap?
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Lolwut
...Okay? So alicorns are the norms, but normal ponies are alien?
Wtf
"two full and one empty - for my rifle, sword, rifle, leg and arm armor" should rifle be listed twice?
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He's saying there are the chambers for his rifle, and that he also has his rifle, not saying that he has his rifle twice
7802738 I believe he's referring to how some unicorns or Pegasi are depicted as having both wings and horns. Though you're right it is odd that he doesn't recognise a unicorn or Pegasus but does recognize what the shoe calls an alicorn.
that's what you call a filthy mud horse
The introductions were as expected (meaning that they were on point and amazing). I guess I'm kinda glad that you didn't go through every year of Miles life but eh. I'm hooked right now so I'll just continue to feed my addiction and stop writing
Enserio no sabe lo que son plantas, incluso en un mundo futurista deberían tener una idea de lo que son por película y eso
ааа Я кажется начал понимать историю! Правда я должен был для этого МНОГО выпить алкоголических жидкостей!
Okay... His reactions are all over the place. First he's scared of the ponies... for some reason beyond them being "alien"... then he's making a break for it after being captured... then he's calm while putting his gear on... then he's freaking out again because of ponies with horns and wings?
I lack so much context.
Nudist powers activate
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Damn this is one of the most hated post I've seen