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Fire the cannons of first!
329771 ...at your face
F@cking firsters
NEW CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i found this:
And once he was gone I couldn't scry him, so we have no clue where he is."
wtf is a scry?
524228 It's a spell That allows one to see the person and if one is skilled enough the can see where they are at.
"It would let me this Princess and find out if it's the year the calender says it is." (last paragraph)
Are you missing a verb or something?
"to the closes building" should be closest.
2371762 Fixed. Thanks.
Jeez, your narration for Luna sounds terrible
Man this story went to shit after the time skip, military turned him into a pussy.
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webmemes.org(kiddingme)
So, what, no constructive criticism? Not gonna say how he could improve?
He doesn't know what the sky is? Seriously?
Wtf is going on, did I accidentally skip a fuckload of chapters!?
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nah don't think the story mentioned it, but I'm thinking and could be totally wrong on this, that in his time (the past) the world was so polluted that cities had to dome themselves up and recycle air through purifiers (which were mentioned when he first arrived) and so went to the future where its all cleared up and sees the night sky for the very first time. the end
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that's a good theory, I was wondering about that myself.
3282898 they lived under a dome i think
3807647 (I read ahead and am now rereading the story as I don't remember most of it to read the newer chapters soooo SPOILER ALERT)
They lived underground with a dome made with magic/technology that creates light. Its also why he thought trees were columns and the wood was brown metal.
Heheh. Epic tear.
So it is possible to run from AJ and Twilight, you just got to outsmart them.
Damn it.
I'm guessing he awoke in the Everfree? (Also, does he know what trees, grass, and just general plants are?)
5884108 I think you miss-spelled "awesome"
6223102 But he didn't even say- Oh. I get it.
5885525 It doesn't appear so, so perhaps their race was subterranean, or they simply polluted the world too much for anything really to live, and to cover up the sky. Who knows?
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you can scry into the past or future if you are good enough
Because the main characters live there, silly!
okay, so what does he still have left?
Revolver, Kevlar mesh, pants, knife, guns,
sword.?5884108 yeah, i hate that shit too. writing sins 101.
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Why is flipping perspectives a 'writing sin'?
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I think it's not so much the flipping of perspectives so much as it going LOL HERE'S WHO THIS IS at the beginning of it. We should be able to figure out whose perspective we're seeing from from context clues and such.
Is Luna beat princess? Yes, yes she is
Hahaha
Well, Fluttershy's character is pretty on point but I'm surprised that Rainbow Dash or Pinkie Pie weren't called to inspect and then chase Miles. I mean Rainbow Dash gotta go fast and can easily catch Miles he can't outrun Fluttershy. and then Pinkie is just unexplainable
Странный типок этот Мили! Яб на его месте уже Флаттершай брал бы в оборот сиди у нее дома и попивая ромашковый чай на протяжении 2х глав!
I never knew he was french.
Luna is the best