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fucking love this story.
Then who the buck I twighlight talking about
Or did storm get amnesia?
Finally! I was waiting for him to magic it up in front of the pony folk!
And what a way to do it! Awesome!
I can literally think of nothing better to say than what's already been typed here to express the awesomeness of this story. And you release a new chapter like once every two days! You rock!
You do great work and I really enjoy the updates.
that awkward moment when you say someone tried to rape you, but it was the wrong person...
good thing he didn't break the inficiunt promise
HE NEVER TOLD STORM ABOUt DIS MAGICS!
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Meh, its probably happened to many a man.
Raping a woman = You're worse than hitler.
Getting raped by a woman = You're labeled a pussy.
Yeah Girls are so oppressed aren't they?
Wow, i have a sense of dread that the guard that took raindrop also took storm's name
2171758 Tell me about it...
2171758 I was raped as a child...it sucked and the lady was a total stranger...and actually, both genders oppress each other, both deserve better treatment
Who you are is based on your memories.
will 5 am right now lol loveing the story great work and have a great derpy day lol night
Thank you for you're work. You write brilliantly.
Twilight is probably just projecting her negativ thoughts and feelings onto Storm, just because he resembles her old flame a bit to much.
Basically this is a reaction for him kissing her so sudden in the hospital's cafeteria. She just remembered of how this colt took advantage of her, and when Miles kind of did the same in that situation, since she was depressed at that time, it made Twilight overreact by memorizing past pains. She doesn't want to be at fault for misjudging Miles and partially out of ignorance, she still pretends he is her old Coltfriend.
sigh BEST THING EVER
Wow, get sad and kick the shit out of stuff. I know to many people that wouldn't find a problem with this.
3775112 Yeah I think alot of people can relate
3946030 yep though I do one big scream an lose my voice for a hour but feel better after
Wow Miles got Storm to help him pay off his debt!
YEAH!!! CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!!!
why IS his feet on fire?
5424770 He can use magic to create fire. Where Miles comes from, magic is a essential tool and weapon in military life. He used the fire to propel himself upward.
5589416 actually the fire is more of a physical manifestation of the magic around him, which is transferred into a kinetic energy used to propulse himself. The fire itself gives of very little energy, much less enough to shoot him up that high. It's just a simple transformation of potential to kinetic energy.
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Discount Sarah Palin.
No. Her name is Mayor Mare.
Notice how Miles didn't tell storm about his magic. XD
5918443 i don't think so, i mean, you job title and your sex for your name, just sayin.
5918443 mayor mare is a title in this story not a name. like how we humans would call her madam mayor but said mayor would still have a name. also i could be wrong about this but i believe the canon card game state that her real name is something close to the name he used for her.
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Mayor mare.
wow miles gets out of doing half the work by getting storm to help him that bastard
And that, that right there, is how you avoid the topic of hot feet.
After all, his feet were only on fire. Nothing major or anything.
Hawaiins do it all the time...granted they don't engulf their feet in arcane fire.
Nice job Miles.
i have a throbbing headache right now i have to stop reading.
one more chapter
First the Elements as Miles' friends, now this...
Interesting...
Ooops. It is now 0230. That's an AM. With work at 0630.
I'll be honest, the first chapter had me hooked.
The next three or so, were kind of hard to get through. Not because lack of pony, but because the whole thing just seemed horribly forced and rushed.
However, now at chapter (oh, shit, that far through already?!?) 22, I'm finding the story to start developing properly.'
We have various threads involving different characters, that are going to be interesting further down the line.