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Giant chicken lizard
Spike is going to be in a lot of troubles~
Its the Great and Powerful Chicken. (Digimon Data Squad?)
Aww, shes even happier now her family is so large, and depending on hatching rates, going to get even larger.
Spike really has a way of picking up the ladies. Wonder if his Terradisian or Equestian numerical rules will hold greater?
When faced with any new application of an aincient tax code thrown at you, if you have political power, you fist find out wich of your opponants it applies to, then you go to the press with it.
Unfortunately in politics, Mutually Assured Destruction is where the barganing starts.
How much chapters before Luna became human?
I wonder who this mystery colt is... I bet he's some sort of commie spy sent to disrupt Mooseden's economy, yeah! That's it, he's a commie spy!
That, or he's some sort of weird magic pony that will no doubt play an important role in the plot by knowing something or doing something. Seeing as he's sort of playful I'd wager he's a good guy. Still deserves to be beaten though, he's a thief. Maybe also a commie... Maybe a spy.
5485480 You're gut instinct would make Liberty Prime proud, and I know TB will agree with me on this.
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Now that I think about it, Liberty Prime would be an interesting addition to this story. Like if some portal to a fallout universe opened and he came through...
That's just speculation though, I doubt it'd happen, still an interesting thing to imagine.
Like if pre purge United States Marines showed up, how everyone would react and stuff...
Wow... I'm rambling, so I'll just stop right here by wishing death upon that foul commie spy.
Giant chicken lizard hummmm
Wonder wat it tastes like
Your case with the crystalline drake reminds me a lot of cuccos in zelda, but without the fun playing around and more screaming and absolute terror.
Poor poor Miles and Luna, they're son knows a new term and it could possible scar his childhood/ foalhood? Colthood? Ah screw it, I can't think strait as long as Sweet Apple Acres is threatened by the feds.
Now days, old laws like that would be considered antique and irrelevant to modern society, like the US government and our constitution, our second amendment, inheritance tax ( which in my unwanted opinion is the dumbest fucking thing that our ignoramuses in Washington have come up with.)
Hell, there is even a law which states that once you place "money" into a bank account it is no longer yours, and it belongs to the bank. I GUESS I'm done with my rant, for now, but good chapter and I shall await the next chapter impatiently.
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I'm just surprised no one else caught it out of the thousands before me.
5490779 i do the thing.
5492238 To be fair, it may not have been there. I'm going through old chapters and revising them. I've done about twenty six chapters so far, and am working on more at the moment.
Brony on!
PEEEP PEEEP ALL ABOARD THE UPDATE TRAIN, ahh i enjoyed this chapter, allthough i was expecting a proper Political chapter this week, with Game of Thrones style talks and stuff, Eh we can allways dream of a longer summit segment as that was one of my favourite moments of the book.
Anyway keep up the good work, Remember to do more political stuff (i did like ancient equestrian law though) its great when you do... although not sure about the Shadow/dual parents. The time the shadow originally spent with the 2 was very short, and in my eyes not long enough for a relationship to be formed in which Shadow would want them to be there direct family, heck her sister was murdered by the spiders from season one finale of Star Trek tng.... so i cut it some slack,
Anyway thanks again TB,
Stay frosty.....
From Frozen :3
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Mate, im pretty sure she allready turned human a few chapters ago (Even if it was brief,). Anyway, dont really want her to be human on my count.
5486476 "Get the fuck on the ground you little pony shit", I can seriously imagine the Sargent from Full metal jacket appearing and just making everyone cry.
Spike, you're doing it wrong. You didn't even say if she was attractive or not. Are you clueless?
Apparently I lost track of this story about 60 chapters ago, because i have no idea what's going on now.
Guess it's time to re-re-read from the beginning.
5506204 I was a proof reader at the time, and it was either that chapter or the following one all the clop ensues.
5506085 'Twas an old comment before I read the answer.
I've been very tempted to read this for a long time but the sheer size of it is kind of intimidating. Can anyone rate this with a good "non-spoiler" review? If not than I may give it a try later but I just need to know how it is.
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It's the best fic I've read. And I've read a lot.
In short, the characters, story and locations (not sure if that's what I should say) are litteraly 10/10.
5511397 tank catapult/10 on the awesome scale.
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It gets kinda confusing especially when your at work, but it has to be done.
That tiny nagging feeling in the back of my head that Luna and Miles are going to hang out on the moon with this poor colt, and threaten to leave him there next time if something this bad happens. XD
5575390 Damm discord.
(My edits. May they be appreciated, but more importantly, correct.)
But I'm not that good at making foci.
(What's foci? Plural of focus?)
I kneel down so my lite claws are closer to her face.
(lit)
"Of course! Of course! I didn't mean anything by it! I was-"
"Was what? Insult me? Seduce me?
(I think this is worth mentioning. You break the parallelism here. Iliis ends with "I was" and so Spike would continue with phrases that fit as a continuation such as "Going to insult me? Going to seduce me?" Reading "I was insult me" and "I was seduce me" sounds wrong, right? Let me know what you think.)
As I am an outcast for other dragons, so will you.
(so will you be.)
This form a magic requires a mindset different than that of a dragons.
(form of magic)(that of a dragon.)
You are asking to become an outsider of your own people.
(from your own (it's like "outside of" and "outsider from"))
"Oh... my. Um... was she really that rude-"
"He was ruder than rude!
(she/he (Potentially, there isn't anything wrong with this. I'm just checking that you intended to have Shy call him a girl.))
She must have been up for hours reading up on this.
(Having "up" two times in five words bothers me. (_my_humble_opinion_))
"I have good news, and I have bad news."
(There should not be a comma there.)
I'm basically Moms assistant as she goes from business to business and check on current affairs.
(Mom's)(to check on current)
he's got another thing coming
(it was originally "think" and I think that "think" works better here)
She's plotting t o kill some colt whose stealing apples
(to)(who's)
(Final note. You use too many commas.)
(Please let me know if this helps and if there is anything that you would like me to clarify.)
(ciao)
5582361 I have a bog post for all the translations. I know how google can be... odd at times, so I've been keeping track of them.
Brony on!
Hey if you need help with dutch message me
5585372 how the fuck should i know? Im not me.
5589091 hmm...i gues your right about that but he triend pinkies party once and i think he said it was pretty good so why not do it again? Im sure pinkie will not rape him.
5589416 i dont even remember why i even asked that question anymore...
5629416 rip in hardscoped pasta
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Its nice to see anti intellectualism is still going strong these days.
5643753 Because the comment section is obviously the place to write an in-depth review and or plot summary. Fuck off, the amount insufferable pricks on this website irritates me.
5646010 not trying to be rude im just saying it's just one word and out of all the things you could of referenced or done you just said nice, I never have negative intentions its just there happens to be a joke waiting to happen and im the one to make it rottenecards.com/ecards/Rottenecards_7186322_y7qv85j7vj.png (oh and really, im an "insufferable prick" for making fun of one of the thousands of comments. Even if it's a rude comment I put a "no hate intended" under it)
5650051 Wouldn't necessarily call it sarcasm, but neat reference.
5647464 Sure dude, you left "no hate intended" under one of your comments. Spamming absolutely mind numbing memes for no apparent reason is incredibly annoying.
5651413 initially I was just trying to be nice but im starting to think that you're just an overreacting asshole. The reason I post memes is because I find it the funniest way to convey my thoughts (and a bit more insightful than saying just "nice") in a more loose and carefree attitude, and besides the point. I post more serious stuff in reply to other questions. And if you checked who I was replying to, those "mind numbing memes" would make a bit more sense
5651589 I did check, and I still don't see how your trying to be "nice". If you want to post memes as a response, why don't you explain it a bit so it doesn't look like your coming off as an ass. IMO it didn't look like your mean responses made that much sense hence, why I got pissed off at all your comments.
5652800 I never try to come off as an ass hole, it's just people always misinterpret what im trying to say (hell I've started 2 flame wars just because they didn't read all of the text), and because people think what im trying to do is be a dick.
5608433
Not halo.
Hope this hasn't been answered previously but what language do the dragons speak? I cannot seem to find a translation for anything they say.
Did you take down chapter 225? I saw it up there before, but now I can't find it.
I made it to the end for the first time. Now to begin the waiting game.
I'm confused. The first scene is at the badlands Spartan camp while E'Claire is in Mooseden. Is the snore supposed to be Butterscotch instead?
7650924 That was a mistake. I have fixed it now. Sorry about that.
Brony on!
That's what I call a shitty situation.