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The plural for 'wolf' is 'wolves'
Fucking strawberries... I understand completely.
I really liked chapter better than the last 2, I'm not sure why though. This one just felt better.
Glad to know Shadow is more hygienically inclined than perversely.
-Sturrn
The chapter seemed short, but good none the less ^.^
love the ending its a "AWWWWWW fuck my life" ending
Good chapter man. What is it with fillies walking in on people in our stories today?
For some reason, the idea of Shadow and Luna squaring off seems very promising in terms of entertainment value.
Awesome chapter. Miles, brush up on you tickle tactics.
Now I leave you with a Luna unimpressed face.
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strawberries. strawberries everywhere.
Awwwwwwwww shit lots of wtf moments!
Awww, a little war between Luna and Shadow. So adorable but possibily destructive.
I'm curious what'll happen in the future.
strawberries are good, but blueberries are better.
Is Miles allergic to the touch of strawberries?
This is with my deepest sadness that I must say I just can't keep reading this story. I have been slowly losing my interest for a few (dozen) chapters now, and I think it's time I call it quits. I love this story to death and I've been reading since the beginning, so I may come back in a few weeks or months or longer to see what happens. I have to say that my biggest( and by biggest, I mean the only thing I could think of) problem was how OOC the Mane six seem to be getting. After reading 500,000 words, all I can say is I'm sorry(tallest brony should know what that's for) and that I hope to see this in the feature box someday.
TL;DR: SEE YA SUCKERS!
Looks at number of chapters then looks to the word count of chapters then looks at total word count a the "incomplete" tag... HOLY SHIT that's a lot of words!
Meh. It's not bad, but its not good either.
I personally don't like the way the story flows. I liked it at the beginning but now it seems to be getting worse.
How many quality proofreaders do you have?
1723233Yesh.
1722008 As of now... zero. Interested in more though
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...That actually explains a lot.
Please find some proof readers to work on this.
This story needs a new character to make this story more funnier and action pack. Like...I don't..the juggernaut!!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bSuvOVH0aSQ
Hey i just wanted to tell you how awesome i think your story is.
out of all the around 80 storys i faved yours is among the top 3. i can't wait for the new chapter.
and regarding the latest chapter... i don't really understand the rising critique on those.
just keep on writing. i love your story
I love this story it LAT (love and tolerate) like at school today there way a guy with no fiends and im the guy with like 20 (Still don't know how) and he was stilling alone on his rainbow dash laptop watching S1 E2 at lunch. Every one was making fun of him so i went over. he was thinking i was going to kill him. If i was the old me i would of but this time. I sat down and asked for 1 of his head phones. that was the first time i have ever seen that kid smile. and my friends where Dumb founded. at school my pop went from Awesome to dafaq happened but i do not care i got a brony friend at school and im happy and he is to
1735568 You earned one of these.
Brony on my friend, Brony on.
1736837 thx
1735568
I am willing to excuse some of your horrible English because of the meaining of the story.
I genuinely smiled today in class when I read the begining of this chapter (When they were all in bed and had a tickle fight) which is a rare thing, it gave me a warm feeling. The quality of your story never seems to falter and never seems to be dragged on to long, which is an amazing feat itself. This is one of the 2 reasons I even come on FimFiction anymore, the other being my stories. Keeping writing TB, you are one of the last great writers left.
1740350 sry writing is not my strong point
1740350 Thanks for the awesome support. I write for fans like you. (and because I really want this idea written down and would have had a mental break down if I didn't but whatever.)
Brony on!
1740507 I would rather be like that then be like me(at times ripping into people for making a typo)
1740529 I give praise to where it is deserved.
Yay, conflict!
The beginning -D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
The middle - Lolz
The end- Rofl!!!!! You mother fucker im dieing!!!!!
2925841 Dying :)
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GRAMMER NAZI!!!
4084280 Problem with grammar Nazis?
4678291Heil Grammatik!
4693236 ALL HAIL THE WORD REICH!!
and after reading 147 chapters.This makes it into my favorites