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Well fuck, shit just got real. But if Luna gets raped I will come to your house and slaughter you. Okay?
.........you just raped luna......your dead to me.....
Whoa! A time machine. And Steelwing is an utter bastard!
wow man the thing u did with luna almost made me unfave you
Shit is about to go down!
756576 No almost here. That is one of the few things that absolutely kills any story for me.
THAT happening is something you need to warn your readers of as it can be a trigger! Not. Cool.
wait... a TIME MACHINE!?!?!?!756451 mind quoteing the line?
because if there IS a time machine miles could use it.
also...@tallest brony
you made Luna get raped.... you better do something to make it up to the MANY fans of Luna INCLUDING myself that you have angered...
miles can go back in time to save luna from getting raped...if she gets raped im leaving.......
Careful Tallest, you tread very dangerous ground with that Luna perspective. A warning would definetly be appreciated should that happen again. I'll not be as drastic as some folks here, rape happens and more often than anyone's willing to admit. But I think you conveyed why it's so evil very well, too well for most folks to handle.
Hard to read that. I can't wait for justice to come to Steel.
I rarely do this but next chapter soon please. I'm sure we all need to wash the Luna scene from our minds.
Well time to get the nukes ready to kill steelwing
756932 After that dummy scientist used his untested device on you, he then told everyone what it does. A time machine.
Check list of the day
1.Cut the grass
2.eat some food
3.kill tallest brony for making a Griffin rape luna
4.go check Sharky White
Fast i need the KFC recipe and lots of oil
758592 it got a reverse switch?
759926 If there was we'll never know. Dummy used it as an I.e.d.
My hope is that Miles will find his friends in some kind of stasis.
>>TheTownCrier Gawd i hope not i like the Story's where there is only ONE Human there dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
so ya i just skipped over the luna section of this chapter
756432 i think something more "brutal" is in mind
Well, thats upsetting...
This chapter has to be the halfway point fro the story right now doesn't it. Now i need another two days to finish the rest.
Poor Luna, Miles will be out for blood when be finds out
YOUVE MADE MY FEELS SAD AGIAN!
2547159 sage
I don't think luna got raped, Steelwing just fapped to her. They didn't have intercourse, I don't think.
806215das wat I did too.
........
2888108 Thankfully, nothing... Well something but nothing happend, so it's 10% fine 90% I'LL KILL THAT FUCKER IF I EVER SEE HIM!
Well *grabs M870 shotgun* I know what I'll have for lunch today, fried chicken nuggets that is! Now to get that bird...
That griffon...........I WANT HIS HEART ON A SPIT!!!!!!!!!!
3916852
I Don't. Want him to die
I want Miles to come back and then he and Celestia eternally torture him forever. In the most pain full ways possible. Breaking his body, mind and will. And then they slowly destroy his soul.
I'm leaving a lot out, and its still merciful if they only do that to him.
OY! I feel like chicken tonight
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the villan everyone loves to hate
WHO FUCKING DARES TO RAPE LUNA
4250215 You're wrong, torture would be mercy, death would be a blessing.
5225523 steelwing.
Well miles cant go find them anyway....like its 3000 years to the future...
Shit just got real.
Correction: not for sufferers of psycomanical torture neural image generation (aka, people who think up sick torture methods)
Side effects may include urges to find griffons and slowly crush testicals, file head of penis with rough sandpaper, apply a drill through the urethra, use a rusty jagged metal judas cradle and more demented tortures only Botaglove could think of.
5660886 well now I know not to get on your bad side
5660886 I'm with ya, Only I'd break his wings and limbs and make him crawl. Then I'd pick him up and whisper "not fast enough" in his "ear" while I bring a knife towards his eye. I'd cut off his eyelid and begin to peel it like an orange. then it's back to your table for the other treatments. When you finish your round, we let him rest awhile, heal a little bit. Then I wake him up by twisting a broken limb hard enough to get bone to show through. I put a shot of adrenaline into him so he can't pass out and I start cutting. Small, painful cuts, leading up into me using a hacksaw to remove his wings. This would go on for days, and when I think he's suffered enough, that's when I kill him.
Sodomize Steelwing with a barbed wire dildo.
Well, while this makes sense in dramatic sense and is an easy way to push plot forwards. Still it is very cheap way to do so. There has been some low-points in story and this is biggest one of them. Mentally impaired in a cheap way to create cheap reason for her to cheaply hand out deep and important secrets.
It is cheap all in all.
*Vulcan minigun whirrs up*
Time to get me some dinner.
I have a feeling that Steelwing is going to suffer a fate worse than death. Much, much worse.
So more endless internal screaming.Shit got real,I can wait to see steelwing suffer immensely....oops did I say that out loud?*repeatedly Is mumbling kill*
6525650 Ssshhhh...... he will not die while I have a choice. There are many ways to keep something alive, especially with magik is involved. He;ll wish he was in hell.
Wow that wasn't that bad ( I mean the Warning: Not for the weak of heart made it sound it was going to be extremely graphic. ) I thought he was just beating his meat behind her at first but then I figured she just try to tune it out the best she can; Like a out of body experience. But still maybe i'm just more used to stories that going into those topics with greater details.
At first I thought there would be some blood, but when i saw where it was going...
Even if the rape only lasted for a few sentences, I had to sit back and stare my computer screen without reading for a few minutes.
Luna is my favorite character and for me the relationship between her and Mills is very strong and special, I wanted them to be together for that special time.
I don't know the end of the story but this is a message for the writer : Make sure that griffon gets its testicles removed slowly with a rusty knife after cutting his legs and arms, poked out his eyeballs and getting melting metal in the ass and in his mouth.
luna got raped. big whoop. now this story is getting interesting.