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Spartan training?!?!? Gasp!
AND pimps in Equestria?? Who knew???
I hope Breaker gets what's coming to him!
First. can you have more of cheese becuase that was a interesting charecter plus i can just imagine cheese jokes.
also is there going to be openings where OC's could show up?
oh storm with spartan training, hes in for a world of hurt.
509419 Yeah, he'll come back. and yes OC's will have their days.
509428 is their a permanent spot anywhere? (as in he shows up and stays and who knows maybe become a perspective charecter)
509442 mmmm... cant say really. he won't be permanent, but he makes a come back.
dayum, storms f@cked
509452 no as in for OC.
509462 Now I'm lost, explain please
509468 *exhales* ok going to explain... Is there a point in the story in which a OC can show up and become a charecter... and even more detail. is there a point in which this said OC can become a staying charecter and maybe have some perspective moments? (if yes i am asking if i can crete a OC for this part.)
509488 OOHHHH... Yes and maybe. Send me an email about this prospective person and I'll see what I can do.
509502 ok i want to run somethings by you first it is things that will influence the Bio.
Human or Pony?
Pegasi or Unicorn
Canterlot or New York (whatever the equivalent in pony to it is)
if Canterlot Celestias guards or Street pony?
and at last Good or neutral-good? (meaning he sometimes is in it for himself but he mostly wants to help people)
out of th' hospital only to get sent right back in by his best freind's training. only in Equestria.
Cheesy Weezy, Squishy Trap and gay sex. "Why does weird crap like this always happen to me."
Yeah, Storm, you may lost the longest stay in the hospital contest, but I'd say you won the having to hear others having sex contest by a landslide. Now go celebrate by gouging out your short term memory and crying in a corner.
Great chapter.
510980
Let's not forget about that incident at the party...
Er, karma much?
Agreed. Great and oh so awkward chapter. What's with all the awkward chapters lately?
And, why can I so definantly see Storm be put right back into the hospital after almost no time in this training? I feel only pity...
510980 Remember, Miles heard and SAW Storm and Twilight
Wat.
511112 Gay stallion sex is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy more awkward to see/hear than straight sex or gay mare sex. At least if you're a straight dude. Miles got off easy.
I've also noticed that not a whole lot of the other Mane 6 make it into this story often. Before you start addin' in OC's, try to incorporate them into the story more. They're more like flavor characters. Twilight, Luna, and Celestia have all had some major character development in this story. The drunken sleep over had some for AJ and Rarity (which are my favorite chapters so far), but not so much for the others. I'm not DEMANDING that they show up more often, just hoping that before you start introducing new characters, that you expand more on the one's already in your tags' lineup. But don't mind me, I'm just ONE (as in don't do it if the others disagree) of your avid readers.
511398 No worries, I have plans for the rest of them. They will have their developments soon enough.
511405 The mods need to add more smilies like Pinkie's.
And really what I was trying to say, because I have this need right now to extrapolate, is make the Mane 6 your own characters like you did with Twi, Luna, Celly, Storm, and Miles.
511421 Yeah, they will. By the end of first arc, they will all be friends ( think back to what Miles thinks about that)
511423 Seriously, there are not enough smiley faces to the right of the chat box to express how happy that thought just made me.
AND FIRST ARC? 50+ chapters in and it's ONLY THE FIRST ARC?
511433
511434
Have I told you that I love you lately? Cuz I do. You're awesome. No homo.
511441................................
I swear I face-palmed while laughing my ass off at this chapter around 10 times, and just oh god, I know i was gonna be in it but not as a gay pimp
511112 511398 I have to agree. I mean, for me, it's not so much the fact that it is some stallion on stallion lovin' as much as the proximity. They were only like ten feet away from him with a thin curtain holding them back. At least miles had a few walls between him, not that it helped all that much.
Do I feel a Bromance coming on? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EJVt8kUAm9Q 511441 511448
512606 Just don't touch my lower back.
and we get to see the infamous Spartan training (or some of it) why do i feel that this will end up with him in the hospital every night.
511433 I have four planned and they will all be as long, if not longer, then the first one.
511538 well, it was a thursday
storm needs freelancer training from agent tex her self
1077902 HOORAH
Will Storm Cloud die?
2117151
Hopefully...
Duuuuuddddeeeee boot camp X 10 poor storm…
boot camp from hell. well storms doomed
2117151 u mean storm breaker?
Storm, you're going through spartan training from 3000+ years ago, well you're fucked.
Also, it's run by a highly trained and dangerous human.
Interesting.
3060422 yep. but once it's over Twilight will be all over him. imagine him being Snowflake build but without looking like a circus freak on steroids.
3148006 That's rather contradicting.
3778732 Yeah, seriously, is that even possible?
4632358 technically yes it is. Its based upon ones metabolism and size. Since hes a pegasus its highly possible because his body needs to remain light to fly.
"Perfect." We lay there for awhile, just holing onto each other, until Twilight looks out the widow.
Black widow, that is.
Spartan training... isnt he too old for that? they're supposed to begin training at a young age...
Too much kissing.
5732101 It's not actual spartan(Trojan Spartan) training. It's Spartan(elite modern day soldiers who call themselves Spartans) training
5981024 i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/facebook/000/706/073/4cf.jpg
6795243 burn the heretic for the emperor
"I don't to take that chance again." Missing the word "want"