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So it's time for chapter five.
I always liked Storm's mother but now that they're actually living together it'll get hilarious.
Also sorry for sneak peek, there is some glitch and I just couldn't resist to read next chapter.
Another sex scene??
YES
well i personally am against the sex-scene, but only because you need to progress the story further instead of writing sex.
but other things.
and here i thought he had only 7
apart from that. Great job.
your story is of all the 100+ storys i have in my favebox, the one that makes me the most happy when i see an update of it (except growing pains but that one is on eternal hiatus, so it doesn't count)
Is it really necessary? Before you cloppers immediately shout yes, Do you really NEED it?
Cool chapter bro, can't wait to see Celestia's reaction.
When is miles going to pull rank on Celestia? Cuz he should totally do that! It would be funny!
i don't mind the sex scene... as long as it's like not the entire chapter. it adds depth to the relationship... well at least to me.
1794302 Okay, I did read that right. I thought I was just reading it wrong
Okay, wait, sneak peak? What did I miss? Is this about the leaked mlp episode?
As far as the sex scene goes, you can if you want to. I'm worried it might seem a bit out of place as only the main characters seem to get sex scenes, and unless RD is about to take a more prevalent role I'm not sure how it would fit. I mean, we've seen snapshots of Mac and Shy doing the deed but never a dedicated chapter.
All that being said, I'm not against it, and if the creative juices are flowing, why stop it.
Awesome chapter. I still don't like how Camo died but again, I still understand why it had to happen. The explanation does help a lot though. I had figured the explanation for it would be something along those lines.
Yay for Shadow. If she keeps up the physics bending she might get Pinkie Pie's face for a cutie mark.
Unless Damian's scythe incinerated two hundred enemies and changed 50 into Spartans, I think you should probably replace Spartans with griffons.
I think I saw two more but can't spot them right now.
Well once again sorry for sneak peek. Once I saw that stories not yet marked ready are visible to the public I just had to browse my favourite stories.
Griffins?
Rainbow/Soarin sex scene? Fuck'em
Good chapter! I think you should only imply the Soarin' x RD sex scene and not write out an entire chapter full. That way, we get moar story! :3
heh, overpowerdness. kinda like me.
Implying it sounds better than writing the whole thing out. That scene truly doesn't have a bearing on the actual story, it would be clop for clop's sake. On a story like this, it doesn't really have a place unlike the other scenes. Those have a plot point to them as this doesn't really.
-Sturrn
Love Cellys reaction to forgetting Luna's b-day haha
Hummmmm... Sex scene eh?
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Go for it >:D
Great chapter, can't wait till the next!
And a side sex scene featuring RD and Soarin? Why the hay not?
Imply Rd x Soarin sex.
This story is really getting to me...anyway you're doing a fine...fuck it,you are doing an amazing job with the story and comedy.Its really getting under my skin.
Also more awkwardness of walking in on sex time.That's hilarious.
Okay so I decided I'm going to read this I've got a lot of reading and late nights ahead of me
Yea that basically just happened
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You rang?
As to the deleted comment, stupid thing added this twice -_-
Wow... You just blew camo away, his life is now no longer existent because he didn't have a cause... Terrible.
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I called it, u called it, how could know one have called it!!!!
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wonder how the enemy will take it camo lost intel and his life because he didn't have a cause. wonder if their going to try to squeeze true will.
3074241 a certain quote comes to mind. "I have and army." "We have a Hulk."
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More than just creative juices
I probably posted this the first time around but...
Spy sappin' mah Princess!
The badass P.O.V endings in this story are great
BRUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Sounds like someone forgot about something 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😄😄😄😄😄😄
I love this guy give him a hooker!