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Urgh... Slice off life.
love the character development of the children/foals
3722681 They are rationed.
Perfect timing for the update!
I'm liking this Slice of Life style for now, it's fun to stop hurling shit through a line of fans sometimes and just take it easy.
Also, I really hope Rumble won't end up being a jackass.
Anyways, now, to wait for more!
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Oh, hush you. Slice of life is sometimes the best part of these stories.
I'm never gonna get to reading this
Another chapter will get it to a million words
A FUCKING MILLION!
Yay rationing! poor ponies
3722836 it's nothing compared to that in WW2 though....
Um, last 4 our so chapters = shell shock
I can't remember what Shadow looks like. Could I get some help here?
3723181 Black coat, grey hair with a dark blue streak going through it.
3723200 What about eye color?
3723249 Same blue. Cutie mark will be explained later in the story
3722812 But its worth it in the end!
3723260 it was a Lantern ifi remember correctly right?
Yaay, it continues
Wait, isnt there a 200 chapter limit per story, or something, so it would have to be a sequal?
Rationing mght be a real pain, but get it right and yu can end up with a healthy though reduced stature population that will live a long time.
3723725 No, that was her sister. Hers hasn't come up yet.
3723731 There is, but I asked for an extension. I only got it because my chapters are consistently a reasonable length.
yoooo tb so I have to say your timing is amazing, a new chappy on my birthday hell yeah, anyways second note I have finished the first 6 chapters of my graphic novel rendition of your story, I have to ask do you want me to ink and make then full color or no?
the lovable scoundrel and now certified physician
Eve
Subtle FFA reference, nice.
Also everything seems so happy!
So I know I'll be all the more crushed when it all comes crashing down
3724928 Yay! Someone got it and posted about it! I was in it for four years so... yeah, those influences are going to show up now. And don't worry, the crashes will be... different, so to speak.
Brony on!
I have to go a whole week without my computer but ATLEAST I got my iPod to let me stay connected ( Hopefully that doesn't sound sad) . Also if tempestive is like what 6 or 7 y is he doing trigonometry, if miles is most the time not being at home how does he learn this crap ( did miles skip all the handwriting lessons and go strait to math when Temp was like 3 or 4, CHILDREN BE CRAZY!).
I look forward to it
Thank the gods, the time skips are done! I got nothing against slice of life, but I hate time jumps. I just feel like I'm missing so much
does shadow still remember her sis ? i thought that miles had a food generator for the griffins why is equestria sharing food?
Hmm. No mention of Diamond Tirara(little crown thingy) or Silver Spoon.
Great chapter.
3726154 nobody likes green goo except for miles
Mrs. Neighlin... Sarah? Sarah Neighlin.
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3727186 That's awesome and all but.... Sarah Nieghlin has been in the story before.... just saying.... don't hate me
3727585 Well that was the first time I caught it. I tend to skim while reading. Bad habit.
3727590 We all do it. If anyone says otherwise, throw apples at them.
Ok hudge story hopefuly it does not get worse over time...
This is going to be a lng night
3722783 Very rarely however.
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There is a time and place for both. After spending a huge amount of time on an adventire arc, burning through OC's like tissue paper, I think some slower, more comedic down time is appropriate.
3726849 beats starving
3729599 i guess it is also to improve long term relations
3730003 yea that to especially since it seams that the griffins territory are the ones holding the evil centaurs...i really want more interactions with them
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Doing
misplaced quotation mark
Contextually "do" makes more sense(?)
2 things: receipt change from 80 to 60 and also Luna burned the receipt, wouldn't give it back to Sarah/color]
home
Apples'
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I'm not arguing about which sword is better i'm just saying that the katana would beat a broadsword in japan. and also i have collected and used swords of various varieties for almost a decade.
i have katanas, broadswords, claymores even some maces.
but then again i've only collected them and been interested in them for 15 years so you would know more than me considering you do martial arts.
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Everyone has their preferences.
Yay. New chapter and I love the CMC what the look like in there teen's year. awesomeness
Keep up the great work
Have a Great Derpy Day.
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Oh yeah, I got it before in a few chapters. I just didn't really like how it wasn't explained at all, literally 0%, until after everything was all said and done. I reeeally should probably actually start being a real editor for TB instead just telling him I will and then doing nothing, hmmm...
Great story. I love Tempestive so far. The vest actually reminds me of Nyx from Pen Stroke's Past Sins, although Nyx had a lot more to hide (read the story, "it's good," is an understatement). I really do hope to see more of Rampant and Apple Slice (i guess that's Applejack's foal), as well as the CMC. This Rumble character sounds interesting too.
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When in the hands of someone who has never known anything besides a katana, it is an incredibly effective tool. Unfortunately, to everyone else, it is a bit burly and awkward to use if you don't know how to use it properly. It pains me to say it, but I think it may take more skill (and even maybe a bit more talent) to effectively use a katana of any kind than to use a European blade.
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I am fairly certain that a katana would still do a significant amount of damage to a person wearing plate armour. Katanas were (and the good ones still are) made in a way that makes them incredibly sharp, strong, and pliable. They are like hardened steel whips (but with way less give and all in one piece). A story I've heard about katanas is that once the smith was done forging the sword (which took months), a prisoner of war or a criminal who had comitted heinous crimes and was sentenced to death would be bound in place in an upright position, and the future owner of the blade would attempt to hew the prisoner in half in a sort of initiation for the blade. If the blade successfully cut all the way through the prisoner, the owner was allowed to keep it. If it didn't, then the blade would be scrapped and a new one made. I'm not entirely sure if this story is true in all it's details, as i have not done the research I want to do on it yet, but it still is quite a testament to the incredible sheer strength of the katana.
There's my two cents that I've been wanting to put in for a while.
3738010 This fic actually has a far more balanced amount of sexual and non sexual content compared to other fics so don't complain
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That would be true.
But in Latin that particular word that caught my interest (pacem) is pronounced with a hard c. In the story Celestia mistakes this word for possum which would be impossible if the word was pronounced correctly.
3752657 I know how long music can get. But for a song that's suppose to fit within the confines of a story, anything over three minutes can take a while. Think about how long the song takes against how fast people read.
Brony on!
I Really hope shadow doesnt have one of those parasites in her.... i would cry D:
3753945 Remind me which parasites?
3723051 OMG! I LOVE THAT GAME!!
3920476 The Burrow Spiders.