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Every time a fic I'm waiting for updates on does update I get so tempted to make another account just so I can add one more like. Thank you for the content. More please!
i really wanted to be first but second will do. great job btw this was awesome! outta 5
Vunderbar, mein friend! Once again you have proven to be an adept spinner of yarns!
EDIT: Also, HOLY CRAP IT'S NEARLY A MILLION WORDS! I'll be waiting to celebrate crossing the threshold!
I am up for prereading them. I already pre-read for A Dragons Journey and I wouldn't mind having more to do between college and getting crap together for a gaming career.
I was wondering when that situation with Rumble would (somewhat) resolve itself.
Someone may have already brought this up, but "Tempestive Mortem" doesn't mean "Timely/Early Death." Well, it kinda does, but the case is wrong for one word, and the gender is wrong for the other. Google Translate doesn't get them correct most of the time.
"Mortem" is the accusative case for death, which means it's used for direct objects—if someone were translating "They evaded death," you would use "mortem." As it is, you need the vocative, which is the case for nouns used to address people or things. For the noun "mors," both the nominative (the subject of a sentence. It's not important to know here, but I'm being thorough) and vocative are "mors."
"Tempestive" is the vocative case, so that part is correct, but it's the wrong gender. Yes, it's a boy, but that doesn't matter, as "mors" is a feminine noun. Adjectives are supposed to match the noun in case, gender, and number, so it should be "Tempestiva."
If you want correct Latin, his name should be "Tempestiva Mors," but it's unreasonable of me to expect somebody to change a character's name just so it can be grammatically correct in a dead language.
Celestia grounded? Well, thats her on a no cake diet for a couple decades.
With Spike being in the library, as a Spartan, as Spike The Librarian, I gone and forgot whats happened to Twilight, she is up at the airship?
As for the language, yup, some internal consistancy is nice, but as Shakespear showed, he had to invent one in ten almost of the words he wanted to use, and Turing, who effectively codified the restricted rules of universal computation, then went on to prove that you had to break those rules in order to compute the greater number of problems.
I can be an editor! Already do thee things regularly!
i offered to preread awhile back and my offer still stands just Pm if i am still needed.
also cant wait to see the "talk" between miles and rumble i do so enjoy these slice of life parts and with miles still doing his military things hes not in them enough!
all miles would need to do is sit there in all his alicorn glory and just stare
yeah Spike tell him the shitload that he will be put trought
4975558 ...and finished! Took me 3 weeks to read this absolutely outstanding story! Keep up the amazing work, TB!
if rumble ever puts his hooves on shadow again like what they did under the tree i sincerely hope hes castrated. NO PONY TOUCHES SHADOW IN THAT MANNER
chapter 99, remember that? Invisibility sheet for quick kidnapping. Or secretly making out with Lulu, either or.
and now Rumble needs Miles' permission.
I think that sheet should make a return when Miles learns who Rumble is and what he did, just take him from the middle of a crowd or even in school. Make him prove himself the Spartan way. Jesus Christ that would be awesome, I want this, people with sway make this happen pls we need it!
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