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The brony point system is a form of story currency where if you earn enough, you can suggest actions to occur in specific scenes in the next chapter, or what characters should do what. Mentions of Brony Points being cashed in appear in TB's author notes throughout the story, in each chapter where such was applied.
TB can provide you with a more in-depth explanation if need be, since he's the one who invented the damn thing.
8061321 Brony Points!
... and you may be getting an email soon...
Brony on!
Brony Points sound like a good idea. Its best to get the POINT across i think. Eh?
So are we still in Arc Three? Even with all of the political stuff, and fighting between nations?
8064896 crazy right? Imagine what'll be like when the actual fighting starts.
Brony on!
Any, any, any? Claim by magic trifecta thats as binding as a Pinkie Promise?
Miles just brought his fists to a Nuke fight.
Wheeeeeeeeew... politics man, I wanna try my hand at stuff like this in my own works but christ... I would fail.
Nicely done TB.
Well then,
Just finished another reread and this comes out, yay.
If anyone hasn't read this again, do it. There are a few subtle references in there.Good times good times.
So yeah keep it up, and yeah nice chapter.
I lost my page back in 2014 what do? At the time i had the story as an epub file so it didnt save my chapters.
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Still, I feel like just being told whose perspective it is isn't that bad.
Welp. This was in my read later kist for a bit but now I'm finally through. I'll just say this: I'm waiting for more.
Dragon
It has taken me almost two years of constant reading when I had time in between work and everything else to finally get caught up after 249 chapters. I just have one thing to say now… I hereby am issuing a challenge to tallestbrony should he except it is to complete this story with at least 800+ Chapters and 3,000,000+ words.
On a side note how does the whole brony Points work?
8155592 I realistically can see this getting to 500 chapters, tops. But, I've been wrong before. And I have a blog post explaining the Brony point system. Basically, comment or be involved with the MoWverse group and I keep track. Eventually I ask you something that influences the story in a small way. That's the gist of it.
Brony on!
Holy hell batpony I caught up from the beginning! Also I would like to see father and son kicking ass or father and daughter doing the same.
Gotta ask, how long does it take to write a chapter?
8163438 It varies from chapter to chapter. Sometimes life gets in the way, other times I push them out within a few days. I've been a bit preoccupied as of recently, but the next chapter is almost ready.
Brony on!
lol i haven't read this thing in ages never got passed chapter 160 and lost interest it got to repetitive and bland but i did enjoy it mostly
Finally finished it.
First off, criticism! Note that I suck at giving positive criticism so regardless of how much I like a story I am just bad at recognizing good points so it'll almost always be overwhelmingly negative. Only thing I can say in that aspect is that I still really like this story.
First point: Grammar and spelling! Get an editor. Also, It's Shining Armor, Sweetie Belle. Nitpicks, maybe. However, seeing it repeatedly is still a bit annoying.
Second point: Survival instinct, or to be precise, lack thereof. You tend to have Miles' enemies all get wiped out. This makes sense when it's monsters, but you'd think that more people would surrender when several of their comrades get simultaneously effortlessly slaughtered. Most of the mooks seem far more dedicated to their cause than they reasonably should be. The more recent chapters have been better in this aspect, so that might not really be an issue anymore.
Last point: Fourth wall breaking is fine, but when possible, don't make it blatant, and don't make it last longer than a few lines. It breaks immersion and while somewhat funny initially, gets old rather fast. We don't want to watch Pinkie discuss things with the author over longer conversations.
Now then, thoughts to the story at the moment!
... Let's see how Miles deals with an actual world war with no solid alliances. The stage is set, the actors are in place (the visible ones at least), let the mind games begin.
I have finally caught up with the story.
MAN did that take a while!
With how good this story is, i suggest you take a look at the German WW1 soldier's handbook, after all, Abandonment gets you shot
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Funny. Don't worry though, the next chapter is coming soon. I may have started it over because of things within the chapter and... you'll see.
Brony on!
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MY BRAIN!!!!
Not even a week of reading this and I'm already caught up....I need more