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Do you mea Twilight?
298477Oh wow thank you for pointing that out
One question does this take place around ww2 the cold war or now
Not going to lie, I don't normally like HiE fics. That said you have my interest.
:l hmmhmhmh seems good so far javascript:smilie('');
Sounded a bit like 'The great dragon migration'. But I'm tired and possibly wrong. Ah well, off to sleep.
I was gonna ask why this is on fimfiction if no ponies... but then I realized it's still the first chapter. oh well, I'll keep going with it for now
I thought it was a challenge to read 92,00 words in 1 sitting. I'd better write a will and get something filled with caffeine for this one.
Me: Alright lets do-- (Sees 140 chapters) there goes my nights rest XD This is awesome. Like and Fav!
stayed up all last night reading other stories, found this one at 8 P.M. just in time.
This is very interesting I am compelled to read more...
Ah, young Miles. I love re-reading stories where some guy went from nothing to awesome because of these kinds of things. He has no idea how different things can get in so little time. He doesn't even know he's powerful yet. Hell, he doesn't even know his own past because of repressed memories!
so far is seems like Haloverse. futuristic stuff, green food chips, and mention of "Spartan"
I have my steampunk playing and I have 6 rockstars, one sitting full read through. TIMES.UP CHUMS LETS DO THIS!!!!!!!
As soon as I saw the number 166 on the top I realised: I am up for several sleepless nights if this is interesting enough... and it already looks interesting.
Curse you, sleep, why do you keep me from my endless reading???
Good revisal. Aside from some mistakes here and there. Pre-revisal didn't draw me in as much as post-revisal. Giving it a second chance was a good idea.
YEAH... This is wrong. "To know war is to know fate" would translate as "scire bellum est scire fatum". "Scire" is an infinitive, it does not need "ad" to be an infinitive. Simple word replacement is not sufficient to translate from English to Latin. Hell, "ad" wouldn't work anyway because "est" is intransitive. There's no place for a direct object in that sentence, which is a typical predicate nominative construction.
What makes this more confusing for me is this is one of the few times Google Translate gets the translation from English to Latin right, although it substitutes "cognoscere" for "scire". I have no clue how you composed that bastard "sentence".
Dame meters. I forget how to make you into feet.
Seriously? Hermit? And the Captain that comes is the Whispers of War? That's just lazy...And really creative. But shouldn't He have a more masculine first name? Susurrans sounds very feminine
I wasn't going to read this but I was like, to hell with it. Interesting first chapter, I will give it one more
Ah it’s a Halo cross over (or at least Halo esk) …Thought this scenario felt familiar. The term Spartan clenched it.
700,000+ words *cracks fingers* OK let’s do this.
2665687 pfft, just 700,000? Bitch please! Read diaries of a madman! That shit is awesome! Over 1,000,000 words.
2845768 dang it you beat me to saying that meh oh well but diaries of a madman is awesome :D can't wait for the new update
Not as many word as diary of madman but it has enough for me to keep busy for five or six days
...Is nobody else bothered by the fact that this begins in an orphanage? With the dean not providing enough, and the main character getting into fights? Kinda cliche.
Or how about an eight year-old making the decision to join the military, and just immediately leaving to do so?
Or how about the captain rolling up in an armored humvee with a loaded machinegun?
Just...
Why?
Well... This is a daunting prospect.
800,000 words.
Sigh
Well, I'm going in. Tell my girlfriend I love her.
800,00 words and I already like the first chapter?
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3049629 BITCH THIS STORY
I dare you.
800.000 world And i'm Loving it so far lol
a mad man makes his decent to insanity and dwells into his passion. brown pinkie is not required.
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WHAT IS NAVARON'S REAL NAME?!
3169028 Navaron is his adopted name, originally it was "Anon" as in "anonymous".
You use "as" too much. There are other words you can use like: because, while, during, ect... Sometimes you can use and too:
"Idiot!" One of the bigger kids pushes me down. "Good job on getting caught! Now give me the flakes!" he yells and tries to pry them out of my hand.
Holy crap 195 chapters!? Jesus I have a long read xD now I never actually played any of the Halo games but from things I've read from other people talking about a "spartans life" is that they are taken at a really young age and basically grow up in the military, I thought of halo all throughout until the man said spartan pen, then it was confirmed for me xP
is this a halo crossover ?
3353821 This idea pleases me.
Ah, restarting from the beginning. After 199 chapters of awesomeness it is like fresh air
Just started reading this story for the first time.
I've noticed the captain and Miles have the same last name. does this mean the captain is secretly his dad?
Good first impression on the chapter, the beginning is very smooth and I can picture it to be in a movie or something.
Also some poeple need to stop getting all itchy around their behinds just because something seems "cliche" or "worn out".
So what if the character is an orphan left witha choice to change his life? Hell Iv'e seen plenty of movies like that, and just because they have that one fact in common, it makes them "cliche" and thus bad?... Nope not in my book!
When Alladin finds the magic lamp and turns from being poor and an orphan, to a prince because of magic, doesn't that make the story "cliche" in matters of "poor guy goes rich by luck"?... If so then WHO CARES? The old Disney movie is damn good and THAT is what matters.
If the author chooses a beginning like this with the main character being an orphan, left with the choice to join the military to possibly make a better life for himself, then let him do it. There are much worse beginnings to a story, and I have the feeling this one here is gonna be really good anyway.
Of course a definition of "better life" will be revealed shortly, that said In oncoming chapters
Ah, the old Orphan-being-sent-on-an-adventure trope. an oldie, but still a damn goodie.
im scared of that over 200 chapter thing
It feels like I'm about to read a fucking series of novels.
I've got a lot of reading to do; the rest of the bible (I'm still in the genesis), and this story. Oh jeez.
-Clay the Draconequus
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It's worth it. Trust me, I work for the Government. No but seriously it is worth it.
Let's see here --
* orphan: check
* joining military: check
* no going back: check
* be called Spartans: check
Makes me think of Halo. This is the second story to do this sense I got on the computer.
*opens story*
well I'm not gonna have a life for a couple days
3800544 I know that feel Bro
You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention.
A story with over 200 chapters...?
*Brews a pot of coffee* This is going to take a while, but damn, if it's not going to be awesome.