as i fear I do have a cold. but it seems to be getting slightly better. I went to the walk in clinic and the doctor gave me a prescription for some antibiotics. yes i hear everyone saying all the time antibiotics don't effect a cold, well the last 5 times i had a cold it wouldn't go away till i got some. the worst case was were i waited 3 weeks before going and then it took 5 days before they kicked in.

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I have made a lot of progress tonight. thou i feel really fatigued, really hoping i haven't come down with a cold. my nose has been running all day and my throat feels itchy.

the 3 sisters are now named Aoi, Yuni, and Toki. I'm not sure why ive made such a big deal out of them since they mainly will be in the prologue and have no immediate plans for them later on. well better to have things set up for later use at least.

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while this may seem weird as i pretty much have only blogged about work on my story or a random thing that gave me some inspiration, I found something at work tonight that made me do a double take.

i'll start by explaining my job real quick. I work in retail, an electronics associate at Kmart. and as corporate at cheapskates and wont hire enough staff i have to cover half of the store by myself however this means i have to cover toys!

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while no one knows much of anything in my story yet, as I've been working on the new opening in the prologue and fixing various parts. I've come to realize there are 3 characters in the prologue who are triplets, and well the way they are explained makes it a pain. i'm not going into more detail then the original idea was that all 3 have the same FIRST NAME, now while i thought this was funny at first, as ive gone through rereading and working on it.... well the only way to tell them apart was

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I was beginning up work again on my story tonight... last night? well its 3:30 a.m. ish mountain time U.S., i usually go to bed at 5 a.m. anyways not the point!

I have a large mug next to me with 3 cans or natural orange soda (rather expensive stuff but a nice treat, get my mind back into working.) and ice in it, ive drunken 2/3rds of it down, and as i'm writing all of a sudden BOOM!, one of the ice cubes exploded!

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OK... I'm really unsure now... I found a site with story writing tips for fan fics, and after spending over and hour and a half reading it.... I feel drained, depressed, tired, and i have felt every bit of my inspiration vanish. I'm currently fighting the urge to just delete what Ive written and abandon my entire story. and it doesn't help that most the stories Ive read and like, seem to do the very opposite of what these tips say to avoid doing, or warn against. In fact these tips seem to

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After speaking with a couple authors here on fimfiction Kireberos and suomibrony (if you guys want me to remove your names/links from the blog let me know ok?), who have both given me inspiration and tips. I have been modifying the prologue, in trying to make the MC more interesting I'm going to cut out the couple pages of back story of the character's history, and seed this into the story

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I have finished the prologue at last, however it's not ready to publish. Currently word count is 11048, depending on how i go with the character background issue word count could drop 1-3k. I'm now going to start fixing grammar. if anyone knows how to set up a process to have proof readers, and editors and such. please let me know.

I'm kicking around a few title ideas for my story
pony name and cutie mark still escape me however.

The prologue is coming along, its over 7000 words at the moment, and i believe Ive finally settled on the MC's color scheme. I'm still drawing blanks for the cutie mark and name however. Another thing that bugs me is a portion early on explains the character's background, not in immense detail but i feel like its shoved out to the readers face. i feel like i want to give more details but since this character is based off a little story Ive woven in my head for over 10 years i would need to

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Over the last couple weeks I have become inspired by various stories and their creators on FIMfiction, and I have decided to create my own.
So far I have story ideas down and a general plot.........

The main problem at the moment is trying to describe the main character, as I can't figure out an appearance for him, or the cutie mark for him.

other then this my ideas and planning are coming along well.