Read this stuff, give out your opinion to make it better. · 9:29pm Nov 7th, 2013
I don't really like making too many things for personal attention. And this one is no different.
I doubt that will bring the up-ticks too much, but try to tell others to read this story.
This feels like a story which likely could become an epic noir one, in the actual tradition of the genre.
So yeah, spread it and comment.