The First Chapter Changed!!! · 8:43am May 8th, 2013
Hey!
I've rewritten the story's first chapter! You may want to read it again. I did this because I really want to improve my writing skills, because I want a cutie mark in writing! I really want to thank Not Worthy for the wordy comment regarding my story. To tell you the truth, I really love to read your comments. The longer the better!
Anyway, I think you'll like the new one better. Next chapter will have Rarity in it!