Updated the first six chapters · 4:27pm Feb 18th, 2013
Wow, i did some editing. Like, I swear.
When i reread the first chapter of Her Candidates, I thought, 'holy shit, so many mistakes!'
And SO! I edited the first six chapters, by adding more content (such location and people descriptions), fixing some stupid shit, you know... Especially since a friend of mine got me pumped up after tellin' me what was wrong.