Part of a story thing want feedback to see if i should finish meh · 1:00am Nov 4th, 2014
"No...NOOO!!!!!!" Rainbow Dash screamed as Fluttershy fell to the ground in a puddle of sweat and blood. She ran to her fallen friend. She picked her up in her hooves. Fluttershy winced in pain at the touch.
"Flutters! Don't leave me!" Rainbow Dash cried sobbing desperately. " Please, please."