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  • 490 weeks
    Part of a story thing want feedback to see if i should finish meh

    "No...NOOO!!!!!!" Rainbow Dash screamed as Fluttershy fell to the ground in a puddle of sweat and blood. She ran to her fallen friend. She picked her up in her hooves. Fluttershy winced in pain at the touch.

    "Flutters! Don't leave me!" Rainbow Dash cried sobbing desperately. " Please, please."

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  • 495 weeks
    I need a roleplaying friend.

    Please! I'm soooooooooooooooooooo Bored!!!!

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  • 496 weeks
    Ideas please!

    If u have written or know of a good fanfic or original story on here please pm me

    because we wish to do a radio play

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  • 518 weeks
    25 Followers

    Wow, I don't know how to feel about this... If you could (in the comments) tell me why thou hast followed me. Thank you.

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  • 519 weeks
    50 Questions

    1. What is your name: Autumn Cole
    2. How old are you: 7 days until I turn 15 (April 22)
    3. What country are you from: United States (Maryland)
    4. What do you really look like, pictures are acceptable: Tall, Brunette, Brown eyes, skinny.
    5. What do you wish you looked like: I wish I looked like human Trixie (but I'm fine with myself)

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Nov
4th
2014

Part of a story thing want feedback to see if i should finish meh · 1:00am Nov 4th, 2014

"No...NOOO!!!!!!" Rainbow Dash screamed as Fluttershy fell to the ground in a puddle of sweat and blood. She ran to her fallen friend. She picked her up in her hooves. Fluttershy winced in pain at the touch.

"Flutters! Don't leave me!" Rainbow Dash cried sobbing desperately. " Please, please."

"Shhh...," Fluttershy muttered bringing her hoof to RD's lips. "I'll be fine... in a better place." Those words hit Rainbow like an anvil. She held Fluttershy close, weeping and pleading to Celestia.

"Rainbow?" Fluttershy whispered lightly.

"Yes?" Rainbow said drowning in her own tears.

"Go to our friends, they need you, Rainbow. Take my Element." Flutters said breathlessly. Rainbow turned to her friends. There eyes were full of pain and sadness. There manes matted with sweat and they dripped with blood, there own blood. They had been injured as they held off the evil, trying to protect the weakened Rainbow Dash. The four of them looked in pity at the pair. Twilight then blocked an attack from Tirek.

"You need me more." She said wrapping her cyan wings around her friend of twenty years.

"No," she said with as much force as she could muster.''They need you," Fluttershy took a deep breath. She struggled to stay awake as Rainbow began to sing in her scratchy voice as gently as possible.

Hush now , quiet now its time to lay your sleepy head
Hush now , quiet now its time to go to bed
Drift, Drift off to sleep, leave this world behind you.

Rainbow Dash looked down at the now limp figure in her hooves. She began to sob.

"NO, No, NOOOOOO!!!!" She cried looking into the air.

"Rainbow Dash! Help, Help!!!!!" Twilight cried straining from the magic emanating from her horn. Rainbow Dash stood as if in a trance. Looking done at the pale yellow body of her friend. Quickly, she collected Fluttershy's Element of Harmony. She wrapped the gold necklace around her neck.

Instantly she felt a tingling inside her. As sensation grew, she couldn't move. She began to panic as she could see anymore.
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"Rainbow dash? Come on. Rainbow." Twilight stopped talked as her friend grumbled, well, actually she didn't."Oh thank goodness, your alive."

"Why wouldn't I be?" she grumbled. She rolled over and winced.

"Don't move." Twilight told her in a stern, yet motherly way. She watched as Rainbow Dash, ignoring her, sat up. Dash looked around and gasped as memories came back to her.

"What happened?" she said reaching to put her hoof on her head. Her eye's grew wide. She tried to see the top of her Head. "Can I have a mirror?"

"Celestia and Luna over powered Tirek and killed him once and for all." She said slowly trying to avoid giving Dash a mirror.

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