409298thanks man. I really appreciate it.

408599 Ever read "Return of the Changelings"? That story is basically proof that your fic wasn't the worst out there. Besides, first fics never tend to turn out well, mine sure didn't. Just give it a couple more tries, the more you write, the better you get.

408567 Hey thanks. But, what could be worse than mine? That has to be just writing one letter over and over again!

Hey, I was about to comment on your story, but noticed that you removed it (which is understandable, considering the like/dislike quota). I would just like to say that I've seen far worse attempts at first fics and that your actual writing doesn't have too many flaws. With a bit of practice, I believe that you could be a fairly decent writer.