While it is now obvious Twilight is super powerful when pumped up with the power of four alicorns and not to mention awesome. However, I will say the whole rainbow power look they got was a horrendous design. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed the episode.

So, what did you guys think?

So, let's say Magalor didn't give his name to the Mane 6. Based on what he looks like now in the story, what do you think they might name him if they just thought he was a pet or animal?

Current name ideas I have are:
Goo
Shade

I just need to proofread the chapter then edit stuff when I bring it over. Wish it would copy bold and colors when I do. It will be after work when I do it, but should be tomorrow. Look forward to it!

Turn back now if you don't want to be spoiled.

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Anyone else having this problem? I'm finding some of my favorites have new chapters, but I'm not being notified. It's only if I browse through my favorites that I find new chapters I haven't read in old favorites. I've seen this before and it's a very annoying bug.

Nearly done with all the chapters that need to be fixed. I definitely plan to add a new scene in the next chapter at least so I'll need to plan accordingly an appropriate amount of time to spend on it. Next one is my second longest chapter so far so lots of work to be done!

Wasn't much to clean up and I added a very minor scene, but overall not much has changed. Feel free to reread again or take a pass.

Another chapter down, was short and I hadn't made as many mistakes on this one. Nothing too important to update you guys on.

No new scenes, just clean up and earlier revelations. Nothing too special. Give it a read if you want. Feedback or grammar fixes are appreciated.

Okay, cleaned up chapter 3 in Roses for the grave. Not much to say about it, but feel free to re-read it.