Well, Chapter Fifteen is now up. Back to Ponyville while we begin to bring in the rest of the Mane 6, and introduce more of the sub-plots occurring through the middlish of the story.

There's a couple of style deviations within, most prominently the shorter POV sections. Hopefully it isn't too hard to follow, jumping from Rarity to Luna to Fluttershy to Pinkie to Daerev. I think it worked, but, then, I'm not always going to be the best judge of that.

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So, Chapter Fourteen. A bit slow, maybe, but it is an intimate moment, after all. There isn't a whole lot to say about this one, from here, anyway. Feel free to use this to drop questions, or whatever. Enjoy!

Welcome back! I trust the break wasn't too hard--I've been able to get through a lot of assessment, and should be able to spend more time writing for the next few weeks. That means a resumption of weekly updates (yay).

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Well. That marks the conclusion of Part One.

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Well, here it is. The penultimate chapter of Part One.

I can only offer sincere apologies for missing my own deadline on this one. I have literally no excuse; I had the chapter ready to go months ago. All I can say by way of explanation is that I've been quite busy the last few days, and it slipped my mind. I can assure everyone that Chapter Twelve will be posted next week on schedule.

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This was the chapter that really demonstrated to me how absurdly overpowered limitless teleportation could be. There's just no way to control the spread of information properly when you have a character that can, for all intents and purposes, move faster than light.

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We're really stepping into the endgame of Part One here. This is where it gets fun.

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I've had other projects on the mind recently--developing some standalone stories, outside of this universe as well as going back and rereading parts of Lethe. It's . . . eye-opening, reading through the first few thousand words of Lethe. I'm a little surprised at how many mistakes I made.

A friend recently described some of my newer work as 'readable'. That, folks, is progress.

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I've been feeling for a while that this story is moving very slowly. I think that while the pacing doesn't help, what really compounds it is the weekly updates. I really, really, want to just upload the rest of Part One. Alas, that would leave me no time to write Part Two.

Nevertheless, this is where we begin to take off. To me, this chapter holds one of the most important climaxes in Part One, and I hope everyone recognises it as such. Everything spirals out of this.

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Throwing this out there to any interested; admujica just published his review of Lethe. I must admit to agreeing with almost everything he says, though I never used a thesaurus!

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