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Oliver TeLouie


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Thanks for the message. Looking forward to writing and working with you

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We'll if you ask me, you should go for it. Put those ideas to good use. :twilightsmile:

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Well I'm touched you took the time out of your day to reply back. Tbh, ever since I first came to this website and seeing all these fanfics, I've always wanted to try it out myself. I've had interesting ideas cooking in my head all the time, but I never had the chance to write it down and bother going for it; in a more 'Is this even a good idea?' or 'Will they like this?' or 'Is this original or not?' sort of way. I'm just not use to feedback, positive or otherwise. :fluttershbad:

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You don't know how happy I am from your kind words. I wasn't sure when I began writing these stories people would like them. Turns out I was wrong as many people did, especially my alternate take on Forgotten Friendship. And in case you forgot, that special still remains my least fav eqg special out of all the ones we got. They could've done so much better with it but they didn't. I knew right away when I began writing fanfics I wanted to do one and I'm glad many people loved it as I knew it could've been better if the writers figured out what Sunset could do. She can be a lot smarter than many can imagine. Still, I'm glad you enjoyed them. And while I've since stepped down from making these stories, my writing skills haven't gone away as the last month I've been working on making a book that I hope will become a trilogy once people get to see its entirety. It's completely original and something I've always wanted to do, with many references and morbidity of things that exist or happened irl. I wanted to have done originally by the end of the year, but it might be delayed til early 2024 due to stuff that's going on with my life as that's pretty much one of the reasons I stopped making fanfics. Life got in the way and I just lost interest, but didn't want to leave my stories unfinished as that's the last thing any writer should do, leave things unanswered and not finished. :twilightsmile:

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No problem, mate. And I just want to take a moment to talk about how well written your stories are; I've read ALL of them. First, your alternate universe version of 'Forgotten Friendship' is honestly better than the original. Having SciTwi being immune to the Memory Stone due to her strong bond Sunset was a genius move, it gives that sort of character development that the original series doesn't give enough or doesn't give at all; and including Sundown Shimmer in there to give Sunset (and I guess the readers) a bit of that reminder that she didn't go down the easy path to success. Talking now about her friends and those who did get affected by the Memory Stone; although the rest of her friends still retaining the "You're not our friend" mindset, you somwhow manage to write something up that gives them the both the benefit of doubt and empathy later on in the midsection of the story; amd the part of having SciTwi and Spike getting pissed off at them is brilliant, I love it. And in the Micro Chips part was a better way to show off Sunset's change of heart. And for the Wallflower section, mwah chef's kiss, 10/10 (although the only criticism I have was calling her transformed state just 'Demon Wallflower' was a bit... lacking). If I was a decent animator, I would really like to make this cone alive, but I can't.
Second, talking about the rest of your stories, which is just I guess you trying to continue the EQG timeline. After spending 3 days reading ALL of them, well... I'm out of words to try to say how amazing these are. Anyways, you did a really good job on making this a reality in fanfiction history. I hope this isn't too long for you to read, and if it is, I'm sorry about that. I wish you a happy life and prosperity.
Sincerely,
Oliver TeLouie
:ajsmug::fluttershysad::rainbowkiss::pinkiesmile::raritywink::twilightsmile:

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