Revising · 10:05pm Nov 7th, 2013
Hello everyone!
After some constructive criticism, I've decided to revise my story 'Rivalry of the Gods'
That's why I haven't been updating my story for a while, and I hope that you guys will forgive me for this – It's for the better, trust me.
Being told that I comma spliced way too often, and used the verb 'to be' too much, really opened my eyes.