Revising

Hello everyone!

After some constructive criticism, I've decided to revise my story 'Rivalry of the Gods'

That's why I haven't been updating my story for a while, and I hope that you guys will forgive me for this – It's for the better, trust me.
Being told that I comma spliced way too often, and used the verb 'to be' too much, really opened my eyes.

The story will be roughly the same, but I'll try and make it flow better this time. I will probably drop the 'comedy' tag. Reasons being: it just wasn't funny.
I could make an omake chapter with humour in it in the future, but it's better if I don't try and force it.

That's what I wanted to say. Maybe next week the changes will be live. So if you've enjoyed 'Rivalry of the Gods', don't forget to revisit it again, if that's alright with you! :D