dude haven't heard from u in a while everything ok?

Don't worry about the hate mail bro. I get it some times to. Don't write for the one who dislike, write for the ones who like it. if you have no like troll them, TROLL THEM ALL.

Well I was following peoples pages for this story but never rmind I suppose.

whats your tumblr id?

uh guy i kinda agree with the other guys spacing and you jump to some things in the story try to make each entry 1000 words and not the whole thing a thousand i think it would have been better if the whole story was 1 chap and the rest was the story of how she became this way but overall good story and finally PROOF READ that microscope mistake was bad