I think I'm going to spend the next few weeks revamping 'Intervention'. I felt it could have been written lot better, and that there was too much emphasis on dialogue rather than action.
Story number three is almost ready to be published, I need to proof read (3 times) and make sure I'm happy with it.
This is mostly an experimentation with a 90% dialogue story, and I'm trying to create some genuine sadness between my characters. It's the first time I've tried emotional writing, so hopefully it won't suck. Too much, anyway.
See you when story 4 comes out. =)