There's no groups dedicated to the Flower Trio? · 8:05am Jul 11th, 2012
This is a problem that I will have to resolve.
This is a problem that I will have to resolve.
The pre-reader must be prophetic. In the email, he said:
I'd rather have you take a month and let me pass it, than a day force me to say no.
And here I am, almost exactly one month later, with the revised draft. A lot of that month was spent procrastinating, I'll admit, but it was a month nonetheless.
To put it simply: How do you folks feel about them as a whole? Should they stay or should they go?
The EqD pre-reader (see previous blog post) said that they should be taken out because they sound unnatural and ruin the immersion. However, I feel like it would take a little something away from the story if I did that.
Now, to clarify, I do agree that they sound unnatural. A lot of them don't sound like something somepony would say in the moment. I just don't know if I should
So, it's not exactly a trade secret that Equestria Daily is very picky and particular about the fics that they publish. When I submitted Character Development, I knew full well that there was good chance that it wouldn't pass muster but I figured I'd give it a shot.
I'm sure you guessed the result by now.
Hey everyone, Grey Capstan here. I just wanted to give everyone an update.