sneak peak. · 8:19pm May 11th, 2012
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"Hold your fire!" screamed john. the fearmongers were chargeing between the hole in the Canterlot Castle.
"B-but sir! they're almost here!" cried a Guard.
"I said hold. your. fire!"
the guard nodded uncertainly. "Y-yes sir."
the fearmongers were 100 feet away. 75 feet. 50. 25.
"FIRE!" the first line of the Fearmongers immediately fell. the second staggered. "QUICK! DRAW YOUR SWORDS, MEN! CHARGE!" john and 200 guards charged into the frenzy.