EQD responded, and I'm gonna be honest, it wasn't as great a response as I thought it would be. That's totally understandable, since I am a beginner writer. Anyways, here's a copy of most of what was sent.

Specific Issues:
Dialogue tagging mistakes.
Punctuation mistakes, including missing quotation marks.
Use apostrophes for alternative quotes in your story, lest things get confusing for your reader.

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As none of you know, I recently submitted Urbanization to Equestria Daily. With my previous story, I got a rejection fairly quickly, since my story starred an OC alicorn. Yes, I could have done better with the story. Yes, the first chapter was awful. But, I think that I might have to pick that project up again. Starring a pegasus, instead of an alicorn. I'm going to have to toy around with that idea.

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I'm sure no one is reading this, but just for my kicks and giggles, I did it! I finished my chapter before my deadline! Yay me!

Anyways, that means that I now have 3,000 words, and I can send this in to Equestria Daily. Wish me luck everypony! I love y'all

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Hello, to everyone who bothers to read this!

If you are reading this, unless there's something I don't know about, then you're probably reading Urbanization. If you're not, then you should! Tell your brony friends! Tell your pegasister friends! Tie your non-brony friends to a chair and make them read this!

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