• Member Since 2nd Jan, 2016
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DewDestroyer


I'm some brony faggot in high school who lives in Hawaii. I have no writing training and have only written page long essays in the past. That said, please read my stuff.

Feb
3rd
2016

First person or third person? · 9:12am Feb 3rd, 2016

Ugh I can't decide. This is the main thing keeping me from writing. I don't want it to be the generic cringy human in equestria with like me talking about it, but when I do third person it feels just as weird cause I overuse him, his, he, he's and etc. I used at least 6 different of those in like 2 sentences. And I just feel like the third person takes away from the experience. Man I just don't know. What do you guys think? Give me advice in the comments (if anyone actually reads this).