My Story Wounded is out. I tried my best to improve this one but I don't know if there is less or more errors. Please tell me if it does. Thanks

I'm thinking about a new story and I'm wondering on how to make improvements. I have dialogue down better but I still get dislikes but that's because of errors. I dream of making a really awesome story on this website you know. I kinda want to be known like Sergeant Sprinkles or another famous mlp fanfic author. You know?

My new story Sample is up. It took me a while to finish this one but I finished it. Go read it and tell me your thoughts on the new story thanks

I'm back and I'm going to make new stories and hopefully they will be better

Dear Fellow Readers
I am announcing that tomarrow I will leave to stay with my grandparent for the week and wont be back till December 30. I regret to inform you that during that time I wont be able to work on my stories and new stories until I get back. Please be paitent. And when I get back i will start trying to improve my stories and write better stories. Thank you and see you real soon.

My stories keep getting dislikes what can i do to improve for my next one?

My new story In Need of Help has just been released. Go check it out. I tried to do better and i think you will like it or you will hate it. Please tell me what you think.

I just finished another story and hopefully its better than my first one. Im just nervous on what people will think. Hopefully some will like it and hopefully i did better if not i will keep trying. I was nervous when i wrote my first one in fact it wasnt till days later after i finished it that it got approval hopefully this one gets approval and im hoping i didnt make the same mistakes