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First things first, thank you for writing the story! I found it over on Archive and wanted to know if it was over here as well, and it was. I love how you present how Black is with everyone, not literally giving two craps about anyone, though it seems like Twilight is starting to be in his liking (or at least tolerating) If she wasn't, he would have killed all those ponies and not the hydra. He was showing restrain, a sharp contrast from how he acted before. Even the reformation spell didn't take affect immendlity, it's slowly working on him, whether he notices it or now.

Actually in that last chapter, when he said "he was going to take care of it", I thought he said "he was going to take it" That would have hilarious. Honestly, I want to see Black interacting with rest of main six, seeing what awkwardness can come from that. Maybe when he's shown a bit more restrain to interact. Hope this helps and can't to see what happens next

Thank you for adding 'Equestria's False Saiyan' to your favorites! Tell me, what do you like/dislike about the story?

2056790 Sure thing! I would love to do a crossover chapter between our characters, looking foward to seeing it. Thanks again and good luck!

2055800 Thanks. It was a good story and at points made my think. I seriously didn't see Twilight being Beerus's daughter. Can't wait for the sequel, considering that Xenoverse will be involved.

2055017 It's a good story. Bowser is my favorite video game character, so doing a displaced story like that is awesome. Also, you had Bowser grow giant to fight Tirek which is awesome! Can't wait to see where the story goes. When I get to doing my displaced story I want to a chapter with our characters.