Seeing some of the comments and having some time to think about it, I've decided to edit certain parts of the first chapter accordingly. Some of the comments I received said that Rainbow in particular felt out of character. The edits are mostly in response to that, I've tried my best to shape her personality to my likings without having strayed too far from how most people view her.

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I'd been having trouble with the original premise for the story. I would've liked to have continued down the path I'd planned to take, but my mind has made other plans it seems.

Either way, I hope you enjoy part two. As always I welcome feedback. I received some comments saying that my Rainbow Dash from Chapter 1 seems out of character, so I will be looking at that a bit more in future posts.

I have positively no idea what made me decide to come here and give this a try. I've tried many things to express creativity, including music and other things. But never writing. I've always had somewhat of a passion for good story lines and captivating tales that simply leave you wanting more. Mind you, I have no real writing experience myself. I am an amateur at best, and I'm sure this will show on occasion. I do however try my best.

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