A few changes to the first chapter · 12:34pm Apr 5th, 2012
Seeing some of the comments and having some time to think about it, I've decided to edit certain parts of the first chapter accordingly. Some of the comments I received said that Rainbow in particular felt out of character. The edits are mostly in response to that, I've tried my best to shape her personality to my likings without having strayed too far from how most people view her.