I decided on putting my first story on G-doc and making it open for comments.
My first story; Houston, Houston, We have an Incident
Comments and general feedback is highly appreciated.

Ps: The story is finally up and available to read on the site.

This is my first story here at the FiM site. I hope I can make it enjoyable.

This starts out with an encounter between two vehicles in space, close to Earth.

Space Shuttle US Pegasus crew:
Commander: Amy Forthright
Pilot: Dawn Walker
Second:
Engineer: Smith
Com Officier: Ruby
Physician: Lily

Royal Equestrian Space Explorer RESE Harmony:
Commander: Princess Twilight Sparkle
Pilot: Pinkie Pie

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